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fully awake (Free verse) by crwncka1
in the silence of the moment I hear a wispier of love, coming from your thoughts that are in tune with mine, that now will shape a pathway into the unknown for me, with the road ahead now appearing as a vision of mine, seen with a incredible detail that never before existed, with the imagery in my view now manifesting the outer, seen from a different plane as my perspective shifts, toward what is truly a universal view of the whole seen, now in a dynamic fashion of three dimensional awareness, with total unity the freedom to create my outer realm, in bold vision of true love that started as just a dream, now forming on the inner surface I found to be hiding, underneath the blocking state of the ego now discovered, looking within others that lifts away in this awareness, of the greater whole now seen from a dual perspective, that forms a mold of inner reality from which the outer, may now fully become a focus of my vision manifesting, though a mirror of the past no longer seen in darkness, that lights the underworld now becoming the pathway, that my soul may journey back on toward home becoming, a secret stairway leading toward the source of it all, the place where my soul is seeking to merge with god, becoming the final step in this process of elimination, that though my discovery I now find nothing to be real, which is the real essence of inner knowing now seen, though the eye of god a true death of my old existence, that now fully emanates from the original source of it all, and now may begin to manifest with unity and wholeness, a new realm of existence all from within this source, that will become the conscious reunion with my love

Up the ladder: Passion

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10692
Posted: January 7, 2004 5:34 AM PST; Last modified: January 7, 2004 5:34 AM PST
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[10] peaceseeker @ 63.164.145.85 | 7-Jan-04/8:48 AM | Reply
nice journey (to "the conscious reunion with (your) love").
i love this.
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