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just can't (Free verse) by shygirl1619 Can't get you out my mind
so much time has went by but still
i found myself dwelling in the moment in the time
so i cry thinking only time will tell
so i dwell thinking of the what ifs and what will be
but now your to late
i am gone only now a memory for you to see
in your dreams
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Posted: January 27, 2005 5:53 PM PST; Last modified: January 27, 2005 5:53 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7317934 Overall Rank: 11774 Comments:
Spelling and grammar. Need to fix deez things, yo.
A shy girl who was recently dumped
On PR with her poetry jumped. We'll do nothing but damn her For spelling and grammar And rhyme have -- like love -- got her stumped. 181 view(s)
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do something else, now.