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just can't (Free verse) by shygirl1619

Can't get you out my mind so much time has went by but still i found myself dwelling in the moment in the time so i cry thinking only time will tell so i dwell thinking of the what ifs and what will be but now your to late i am gone only now a memory for you to see in your dreams

Goad 6-Feb-05/5:10 PM
A shy girl who was recently dumped
On PR with her poetry jumped.
We'll do nothing but damn her
For spelling and grammar
And rhyme have -- like love -- got her stumped.




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