Re: mission statement by malpaso	5-Mar-09/10:39 PM
two l's in ellipses. the rest... eh. points for intent?
Re: a comment on To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT	5-Mar-09/10:37 PM
kind of funny, kind of sad, I don't remember reading it before. But perhaps it's changed enough. :) I choose that.
Re: To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT	5-Mar-09/10:35 PM
relieving? interesting piece.
Re: a comment on To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer	5-Mar-09/10:34 PM
favorited, even. :)
Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer	5-Mar-09/10:33 PM
Hear, hear!
Re: Snorting the Cosmic Dust. by DreamerSupreme	5-Mar-09/10:33 PM
my eyes blurred. you hit a constant tone that turned the words to mush (maybe I need more coffee).
Re: Back to reality by Prince of Void	5-Mar-09/10:31 PM
the edge of the ocean is just another's hell. or heaven we'd all get kicked out of. but it's nice to imagine?
Re: the invisible beauty by Prince of Void	5-Mar-09/10:30 PM
meh.
Re: diamond embedded once before & always by A. Nomaly	5-Mar-09/10:27 PM
strange... good flow, but the context isn't quite there for me.
Re: Unwind Again by dclark	5-Mar-09/10:26 PM
what? really? no.
Re: Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar	5-Mar-09/10:26 PM
insence -> incense or rather, incense-like hmm. better than I expected, from that; but still kind of plain. paint me more.
Re: The PROJECT by Sigh'ense...	5-Mar-09/10:24 PM
no.
Re: The death of Carlos Huarrez by Caducus	5-Mar-09/10:23 PM
huh. good stuff here. not quite picturing it all, (and what are "blue screams"?). But yeah, some good stuff here.
Re: The flute sound makes me blue by Prince of Void	5-Mar-09/10:21 PM
hmm, no.
Re: Echoes of Eichmann by Caducus	5-Mar-09/10:21 PM
has something, I like the weaving of images, and I think appropriate gravitas for the content. Just doesn't scan the way I want, and perhaps ... rough/disjoint in more than flow?
Re: Pill-Popper's Confessional by Sasha	5-Mar-09/10:18 PM
ROFL Yes. I think it needs a little smoothing, but yes, this is perfect ranker material.
Re: Fake, Emo and Over Shaven by Blindpoetry	5-Mar-09/10:16 PM
"soothe" your emotions, unless you truly mean sooth--which would mean to imply you're prognosticating, some. tracking biorhythms? You've lost me with "diplome" though. Doesn't quite hang together. But I appreciate what you're doing. Shouldn't it be a pimple, though?
Re: for the slaves and the seekers by Bill Z Bub	5-Mar-09/10:15 PM
hmm. hmm hmm hmm. hmm. and no, that's not supposed to mean any more than it says ;)
Re: a comment on prove me wrong by nentwined	5-Mar-09/10:12 PM
The thought came to me (well, "habits") while waiting for dinner to cook in the microwave. ;) Trying to get into shape... latest attempt is lots of jump-roping. Amy mentioned that she used to enjoy it--as a kid; it's a thing kids enjoy, as a game, for fun... I started thinking about how much easier it is for kids to exercise (the whole cubed/squared thing, I think, of what muscles can support), and then started thinking on ... well, they're not doing it for the muscles, they're doing it to learn to do it (and teach their body to learn to do it, some, as well). ((well, they're doing it for fun, but that's not why it's "good")) "fears" and "perfidy" largely came from trying to somewhat match the form that assembled itself into the first two stanzas--but they seem reasonable, overall. :)
Re: a comment on 9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why by A. Nomaly	5-Mar-09/10:08 PM
Personal, shmersonal--come on, we'll rip it a new one ;) But I like what you're doing. :)