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diamond embedded once before & always (Free verse) by A. Nomaly
cattle all rounded up by horse and dog Colorado high mountain season privilege ordained by National Park. Here we are Grandpa, Aunt, Uncle, Me, Guide, collected, tented, camped, sleeping in cots, breakfasts of pancakes, solar showers, stingy flakes of far away snow, ping-panged with no sound, just construction, shored up banks, sleep covered, smile shaped and laughing, hand over hand, long coat waisted and flung over shoulder, waits at bus stop so not to attract attention, given over to one casting wish and simple pleading of course. You may want this someday, until then I will take everything else.

Down the ladder: I glimpsed the ruined world

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6930
Posted: January 12, 2009 6:46 AM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2009 6:46 AM PST
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[6] nentwined @ 75.83.196.201 | 5-Mar-09/10:27 PM | Reply
strange... good flow, but the context isn't quite there for me.
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