Re: a comment on BreakBeat TimeTravel by nentwined	7-Jan-04/8:09 AM
I really can't spell break. that sucks. one moment and I'll fix that. I'm just not sure which one (moment). la. ;)
Re: a comment on BreakBeat TimeTravel by nentwined	7-Jan-04/8:08 AM
I've had a few pieces in print, but overall no. still working on it.
Re: Sonnet Eighteen by devilishnutcase	7-Jan-04/12:39 AM
what crack _are_ you smoking? or whose?
Re: a comment on Fuck by devilishnutcase	7-Jan-04/12:38 AM
uh... you just go and enjoy it, and try not to get it all over poemranker again, kay? thanks.
Re: Fuck by devilishnutcase	6-Jan-04/10:46 PM
certainly a lot of fuck. repetition is annoying, forced rhymes hurt, painfully cliched, couldn't find any sort of flow or rhythm... this should be 'pimple poem' instead of 'free verse'. fuck?
Re: Don't Care by LuV_jOhNnY	6-Jan-04/4:58 PM
Catchy, yet says nothing. I can't say I like it.
Re: Holding on for Jesus by Everyone	11-Dec-03/7:47 AM
For sarcasm, this is pretty fun.
Re: a comment on my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	3-Dec-03/12:16 PM
Then I think I accomplished what I was going for. :)
Re: a comment on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined	14-Nov-03/2:53 PM
Umm. Actually. I'm not.
Re: paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined	12-Nov-03/6:04 AM
:studies line 4 carefully: thank you. Dribble didn't throw you? ((there's movement for the b's to be replaced by z's))
Re: a comment on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined	10-Nov-03/4:53 PM
to drop the syllables in l2 to match the last? I'll ponder it. I admit the beauty is probably the weakest line. But I like its flow.
Re: a comment on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined	10-Nov-03/4:31 PM
what would you replace rhyme with? and I'm leaning towards not using dribble; thoughts on that? there's a suggestion above... trickle. Which I like worse. I'm thinking... hmm. No, maybe I am thinking dribble. I need a thesaurus. ;) [[thesaurus.com: distill, drip, drivel, drizzle, drool, drop, leak, ooze, run, salivate, seep, slaver, slobber, spout, squirt, trill, weep ]] hmm. I kinda like weep. DRIZZLE. Yes. I think v2 will be drizzle. ;)
Re: a comment on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined	10-Nov-03/4:31 PM
Hmm. There are many poets here, and despite all the flattery I don't. Eh. Nice to meet you, in any case. But, I was going to say--there are many poets here, some of them are just very good at hiding. And they do tend to be overwhelmed by folks who think they are poets. Who are in turn overwhelmed by those that poke fun at anything. Some of whom are poets. And some of whom think they are poets. And there are overlaps all about.
Re: a comment on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined	10-Nov-03/12:30 PM
oh, erm, why, thank you, then. :) I'm honestly amazed by the votes it's getting. It's the middle stanza of something that didn't really work right (imo), though the full thing is getting kudos also, elsewhere. I'm really having to wonder if people are just being nice to me. http://www.livejournal.com/community/100poems/743629.html
Re: a comment on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined	10-Nov-03/5:59 AM
Hmm. Yes. Confused is. sorry. (it's what one gets at a poem a day)
Re: a comment on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined	10-Nov-03/5:58 AM
mind time doubt rhyme, drought dribble. :)
Re: a comment on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined	10-Nov-03/5:58 AM
I knew (knew?) that it was bad, but y'all are confusing me like no other. picture give rhyme dribble!
Re: a comment on comment-ary by nentwined	28-Oct-03/8:12 AM
thank you very much. :)
Re: a comment on comment-ary by nentwined	28-Oct-03/8:11 AM
could be. but one never knows. I'd like to think the poem is more general than that, but certainly encapsulates the ranker. a human tendency, more.
Re: a comment on glimpses by nentwined	22-Oct-03/4:07 PM
relation goes the other way around. He does do some nice work. You should buy some. ;)