| Re: a comment on 3am by Nicholas Jones |
22-Oct-03/8:06 AM |
plausible. certainly plausible.
pain in the ass, but plausible.
I'll put it on my todo list.
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| Re: a comment on 3am by Nicholas Jones |
22-Oct-03/7:19 AM |
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| Re: a comment on 3am by Nicholas Jones |
22-Oct-03/7:19 AM |
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I am where the ranker is. so now it's 7:17am.
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| Re: a comment on glimpses by nentwined |
22-Oct-03/6:56 AM |
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You really know how to make a person feel good about their poems. Thank you. :)
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| Re: 3am by Nicholas Jones |
22-Oct-03/6:50 AM |
I'm particularly fond of that ... particular time.
This is very cute.
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| Re: a comment on glimpses by nentwined |
22-Oct-03/5:26 AM |
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thanks; I hadn't considered that at all. :) very interesting. I was certainly going for *something* with "The city/decomposes". Or a couple of things. Hadn't made the leap to post-apocalyptic.
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| Re: a comment on glimpse by nentwined |
21-Oct-03/3:06 PM |
That was an offer; it's as simple as flipping a bit. But as you wish. :)
Geddy Lee?
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| Re: a comment on glimpse by nentwined |
20-Oct-03/7:55 PM |
hrmmmmr?
hmm. would you like something undeleted?
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| Re: a comment on Ù
صادر ÙÙسطÙÙÙØ© أ٠اÙاØتÙا٠by Wobble McFly |
13-Oct-03/1:53 PM |
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is there something you're not telling us?
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| Re: She wishes by INTRANSIT |
12-Oct-03/8:37 AM |
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I read this with pain. 8.
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| Re: the two faces of the bar social. by darby pyn |
12-Oct-03/8:16 AM |
knives 'drove' -> 'driven'?
relatively interesting piece for an 'angst' poem. couldn't quite get into the flow.
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| Re: Song of Spring by meror |
11-Oct-03/4:39 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Birth by nentwined |
11-Oct-03/4:27 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Dammit by Cha no Onna |
8-Oct-03/8:15 PM |
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a bit belated (cough cough) but YAY! :)
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| Re: power by livingcanvas |
8-Oct-03/7:49 PM |
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I like this; simple, but really gets a rhythm.
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| Re: a comment on Why do you give yourself blue tens? by Bachus |
2-Oct-03/5:34 PM |
1 you
2 are
3 a
4 green
5 zer
6 oh
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oh. is that a letter not a number?
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| Re: Why do you give yourself blue tens? by Bachus |
2-Oct-03/2:26 PM |
565
:blink:
566. funny how quickly one can read 'zero' when not paying attention.
la.
I don't like the way you use the title, but... no, I don't like it. That is all.
self-rewarding tens
do not attract green brethren
You are a zero.
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| Re: a comment on whimsicals by nentwined |
1-Oct-03/7:24 PM |
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:intently evil grin: thankee. :)
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| Re: a comment on One Moment to the Other (v3) by nentwined |
23-Sep-03/7:35 AM |
so small, so tight, so... :cough:
it's hard to get the flow just right.
I looked and tried
and another fairy died. :/
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| Re: a comment on One Moment to the Other (v3) by nentwined |
23-Sep-03/7:34 AM |
You wouldn't have a pointer to a "near rhyme" online dictionary, would you? ;) My mind isn't working so well. I've lost my moments ;)
So the here is obvious; which there would you drop? I think the second stanza is next weekest, but couldn't think of anything to do with it.
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