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Don't Care (Lyric) by LuV_jOhNnY
YOU NEVER HIT ME OR CURSE BUT WHAT YOU DO TO ME, IT'S FAR WORSE YOU SAY YOU'RE IN LOVE, IN LOVE WITH ME BUT YOU'RE LYIN', AS FAR AS I CAN SEE 'CUZ YOU CAN'T LOVE, NO YOU CAN'T LOVE NOT IF YOU DON'T CARE, DON'T CARE AT ALL AND... CHORUS Baby I'm tryin' and I don't know why You don't respond to me when I cry Maybe it's just that you don't care No you don't care about me You don't care any more YEAH BABY I'M TRYIN', TRYIN' TO BELIEVE BELIEVE THAT YOU LOVE TRYIN' TO BELIEVE BELIEVE YOUR LIES BUT I CAN'T AND I WON'T 'CUZ YOU MAKE ME CRY, CRY AGAIN YOU MAKE ME CRY IN THE END CHORUS

Up the ladder: Rain
Down the ladder: Dublin, 4-10-04

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7789
Posted: January 5, 2004 12:45 PM PST; Last modified: January 5, 2004 12:45 PM PST
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Comments:
[8] little_big_nose @ 216.207.132.65 | 5-Jan-04/6:14 PM | Reply
nice, i know how you feel and you're not alone
[4] nentwined @ 66.92.28.14 | 6-Jan-04/4:58 PM | Reply
Catchy, yet says nothing. I can't say I like it.
[n/a] LuV_jOhNnY @ 198.108.232.44 | 6-Jan-04/8:02 PM | Reply
netwind: Yah I totally agree with you. I don't like it too much either, I put in on here on a whim after i finished writing it. It kinda gets stuck in my head and i was just curious to know what people thought of it. It's very, like, depressed pop, i guess.
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