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Fuck (Free verse) by devilishnutcase
Fuck this , Fuck that, Who killed the fucking cat, Fuck the bills, Fuck the pills , Fuck them making me chill, Fuck the foolish games, Fuck all the women that cause the pain, Fuck osama bin laden, Fuck all of those people we have forgotten, Fuck dealing with life, Fuck I just cut my hand with this knife, Fuck the women who don`t give head, Fuck them alive or dead, Fuck the hurt, Fuck the pain, Fuck am I insane, Fuck all of this shit, Fuck having to lick some bitches clit, Fuck watching the suicides, Fuck feeling like I have died,

Up the ladder: wine and water

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.428571
Weighted score: 5.1152606
Overall Rank: 6002
Posted: January 6, 2004 10:04 PM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2004 10:04 PM PST
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[1] nentwined @ 192.168.0.250 | 6-Jan-04/10:46 PM | Reply
certainly a lot of fuck. repetition is annoying, forced rhymes hurt, painfully cliched, couldn't find any sort of flow or rhythm... this should be 'pimple poem' instead of 'free verse'.

fuck?
[n/a] devilishnutcase @ 65.156.178.70 > nentwined | 7-Jan-04/12:28 AM | Reply
You could not find rhythm with your own hand. Flow this < grabs my own balls >
[1] nentwined @ 192.168.0.250 > devilishnutcase | 7-Jan-04/12:38 AM | Reply
uh... you just go and enjoy it, and try not to get it all over poemranker again, kay? thanks.
[1]... anonymous @ 65.173.32.8 | 6-Jan-04/10:51 PM | Reply
Fuck you for posting this
Fuck carson daly
Fuck my computer speakers
[n/a] JoyLuck @ 65.173.32.8 > anonymous | 6-Jan-04/10:53 PM | Reply
i posted the above
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