on Children of adults by Caducus
10 Dec 2007, 8:26 AM
Good... but it isn't a haiku.
on Wait To Answer by forsaken
15 Oct 2007, 9:23 AM
Your not serious are you? If this were a "romantic pimple" I'd give this a ten, but it's been labeled as free verse, so here is a zero.
By the way, it's seriously gay to vote for yourself.
By the way, it's seriously gay to vote for yourself.
on A double haiku about President Putin by Engelbert Humpalot
9 Oct 2007, 1:20 PM
Cute.
replying on Death of a Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer
9 Oct 2007, 1:17 PM
You are stupid to assume that the young man of the poem is me, you twit.
Also, I am a selfish asshole... not cunt mind you, that's a term I tend to reserve for women and queer folk such as yourself.
Wops? You mean Romans? Romans and actual modern Italians are different; from what I remember of the Bible, the Jews were the ones that decided upon his crucifixion, the Romans simply carried it out.
Toodles shithead.
Also, I am a selfish asshole... not cunt mind you, that's a term I tend to reserve for women and queer folk such as yourself.
Wops? You mean Romans? Romans and actual modern Italians are different; from what I remember of the Bible, the Jews were the ones that decided upon his crucifixion, the Romans simply carried it out.
Toodles shithead.
on Coyote, The City, and Some Moon by Shardik
27 Sep 2007, 1:52 PM
Hmm.
on Pulling the hill (formerly-in response to) by INTRANSIT
11 Sep 2007, 12:08 PM
I can sympathize in some respects, old friend. Eight. Oh, and don't mind the bearded orangutan; rockmage hasn't yet learned that throwing his feces about is considered uncouth in polite company.
on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT
10 Sep 2007, 2:10 PM
Humorous.
on The Occasional Love by SomeNewKill
3 Aug 2007, 12:46 PM
breath = breathe? Also, this whole thing is confused. Many aspects of this poem reminds me of pimples. Though slightly more matured than the average pimple, it still possesses puss.
Blessed with a two.
Blessed with a two.
on Eroticism by Prince of Void
3 Aug 2007, 12:41 PM
Can you be more inorganic?
on All tonight wandering along in the broken dreams by Prince of Void
3 Aug 2007, 12:22 PM
If your going to do this sort of shit, why not do it better than the classic pimple cliche piece?
Blessed with one.
Blessed with one.
on Caprice by PoetryIsDead
3 Aug 2007, 12:13 PM
The last line is a little confusing to me.
Blessed with seven.
Blessed with seven.
replying on Goldmunds Slut Fiasco v.2 [Revised] by Y2kSlamPoet
2 Aug 2007, 5:15 PM
Thank you. :)
maybe i tucked you in there
i never did look
i substituted you for other songs
--I think you should cut out the 'I's-:
might have tucked you in there..
never did look, substituted you
for other songs
---
Just a suggestion. I'm just biased against the word I.. that and when it's used repeditivly it rings of anathema going super nova in my rectum.
Blessed with an eight.
i never did look
i substituted you for other songs
--I think you should cut out the 'I's-:
might have tucked you in there..
never did look, substituted you
for other songs
---
Just a suggestion. I'm just biased against the word I.. that and when it's used repeditivly it rings of anathema going super nova in my rectum.
Blessed with an eight.
on Unsung American Dream by SupremeDreamer
27 Jul 2007, 1:43 PM
Had to change the rather long and redundant title... Title still sorta sucks... any ideas anyone? Fuck it with a steel dildo in intellectual anathema.
on Beetles by cheese.doodles
27 Jul 2007, 1:28 PM
You are a sad little shithead. A pathetic self promoter. It's absolutely self-defeating to anonymously vote favoribly for yourself, since it shows just how much you, as an insecure twat, seek to boost your esteem through empty illusion.
Naturally, of course, your also a strong supporter of the politically correct movement, [PCM- a.k.a: Putrid Cock Mongers.] since you happily zeroed two pieces of mine- one which dealt with golden showers and the other which made use of the word "nigger".
In short, sir- or rather should I say Child? You are a dullard who is found wanting. To me, you are the beetle I found crushed beneath my Jesus sandled feet.
Good-day. Blessed with zero.
[BTW: If it will assuage your puny ego, you can go ahead and zero bomb my whole collection if you like. Just remember to scream in bloody ecstasy "Hail Rockmage!!" each time you click submit with your molested shit-c-licker.]
Naturally, of course, your also a strong supporter of the politically correct movement, [PCM- a.k.a: Putrid Cock Mongers.] since you happily zeroed two pieces of mine- one which dealt with golden showers and the other which made use of the word "nigger".
In short, sir- or rather should I say Child? You are a dullard who is found wanting. To me, you are the beetle I found crushed beneath my Jesus sandled feet.
Good-day. Blessed with zero.
[BTW: If it will assuage your puny ego, you can go ahead and zero bomb my whole collection if you like. Just remember to scream in bloody ecstasy "Hail Rockmage!!" each time you click submit with your molested shit-c-licker.]
on Stark St. Blues. by SupremeDreamer
27 Jul 2007, 1:08 PM
Note: since this is not a haiku in the traditional sense, without natural imagery, its only haiku attribute being the 5-7-5 syllable format, I decided to dub it a "Faiku". In other words: Don't bother telling me this "Haiku" doesn't follow rigid tradition. I am fully fucking aware of the fact.
replying on The Lover and The Rapist by Skamper
19 Jun 2007, 6:37 PM
Perhaps, but still, why did you leave it out and insert a dash? Stutter effect?
methylated illusion.