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All tonight wandering along in the broken dreams (Other) by Prince of Void
Floating upon the ocean of love Until I’m drown in the last drop of my tears All tonight wandering along in the broken dreams Within me darkness is bleeding hopelessly No more try to put pain away I’m lost at the edge of broken hopes And I will be reborn in the age of sorrow But by now she is dressed in the Wedding dress And wedding ceremony has begun Just I can sing the last sad song loud That unsound song kept all my words inside Down here I can’t see so clear I need to scream out of this grieves I need you And I still love you But we are divided For what we couldn’t speak of How could this happen? And everything you forgot Well if I could ever tell you I love you and Things we did Maybe I will forget everything What I fought for Thorough all these years Tonight I want to dream a dream Where the sun comes out The dawn of love is always there I don’t think it’s over I will drag all morrows Along meadows of owes Beneath the clouded heaven Oh Yes I’m not that lucky groom Not happy ever after Just tears linger on Beside all grieves in my place Only where I can lay for tonight Tomorrow and tomorrow Where my divine love opens The fettered heart is waking All yesterdays had decayed behind My soul flies in delight of devotion I’m still rising and falling Dying down within breeze Emerging the deepest peace of my mind In the infinite mind of universe -------- @};- -------- I’ve written this for my love She married another man So I decided to write verses of sorrows for her I know …it’s not over There are still things to come I didn’t want to be selfish I let her choose her own path Love is not selfishness I know it’s good to know She is wonderful tonight in her wedding dress All things I have done They are not enough To turn back time I should learn how to let it go Well they all last here in my tears I LOVE YOU TRULY AND DEEPLY

Up the ladder: play to win
Down the ladder: Never Said Thank You

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.523188
Overall Rank: 12764
Posted: August 1, 2007 4:09 PM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2007 4:09 PM PDT
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Comments:
[1] Christof @ 62.121.23.56 | 3-Aug-07/1:29 AM | Reply
Believe me, it's over. Get over it, 'Meadows of owes?'
[1] SupremeDreamer @ 192.220.136.191 | 3-Aug-07/12:22 PM | Reply
If your going to do this sort of shit, why not do it better than the classic pimple cliche piece?

Blessed with one.
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