| Re: a comment on Love doesn't cure IV injections of hate. by SupremeDreamer |
31-May-08/8:49 PM |
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| Re: Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar |
31-May-08/1:35 PM |
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| Re: it is my turn this season by daniella |
31-May-08/1:33 PM |
"and pluck the grapes for to drink my own cup
my own handful of cherry red sweet wine."
I suggest:
and pluck the grapes for my own cup
of red sweet wine."
Also check punctuation, capitalize the I's, etc. Aside from all that, not bad... Think the title could be better though.
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| Re: a comment on Unsung American Dream by SupremeDreamer |
31-May-08/1:28 PM |
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And your an ugly lesbian. Everyone has their issues. :P
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| Re: sperladnik by malpaso |
31-May-08/1:26 PM |
um... Genius? I'm not sure. No vote at this time.
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| Re: Fuck stupid chemistry labs by jauser |
31-May-08/1:25 PM |
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Chemistry is cool when you learn it on your own... bathtub intoxicants are the cure for a dull soul!!!
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| Re: In All My Dreams by forsaken |
30-May-08/12:33 PM |
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Oh, Btw FAGGOT: Your no longer on the best list. ;) Fucking loser.
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| Re: In All My Dreams by forsaken |
30-May-08/12:24 PM |
swollow - SWALLOW....FUCK MAN.
Can't you fucking use spellcheck.net? Your writing is fucking gay... even gayer is that you just vote for yourself... you know what? Zero bomb time. I've just fucking had it with morons like you.
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| Re: Sim Saladin by bonjoo |
30-May-08/12:22 PM |
caressed.
Plus, it'd be a lot better if you said "towelheads".
Headtowels sound very gay.
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| Re: Love by dark wiccan |
30-May-08/12:19 PM |
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Idealistic Emo Goo is what killed your relationship, you sad little bitch boi!!! Now stop loving and go masturbate with a razor.
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| Re: Why should i care to be here by dark wiccan |
30-May-08/12:18 PM |
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Shut up and slit your wrists already, loser.
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| Re: Memories by dark wiccan |
30-May-08/12:16 PM |
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You suck emo boy... maybe that's what she got tired of, you know, the unstable sensitivity? EH? Maybe she wanted a guy with like, balls? Yeah, a tougher sort of guy who won't cry and be gentle when he fucks her. The sort of guy who'll grab her ass in a rough manner and ram his rod with a viciousness to match her wanting while talking dirty, calling her a little fucking WHORE.
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| Re: Because of me by dark wiccan |
30-May-08/12:12 PM |
Oh - My - Fucking - God...
You are so fucking emo that it makes me want to barf... just go ahead and kill yourself you pathetic fuck. PLEASE????
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| Re: Modern Stupidity by nentwined |
30-May-08/12:06 PM |
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| Re: Explain him by misused |
29-Apr-08/3:23 AM |
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| Re: ADDICTION by kristie24 |
29-Apr-08/3:19 AM |
*tear
I've
Now this is SHIT. Absolute shit. I thought this was a poem, not your typical NA pamplet or state sponsored BULLSHIT.
With all this drug abuse, you couldn't delude yourself into being "creative"? Or is this what you call the apex of creativity for you?
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| Re: On Youth Revisited by vulcan |
29-Apr-08/3:16 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Death of a Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer |
12-Mar-08/3:12 PM |
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Transexual dykes such as yourself make it difficult for anyone to breathe, you ugly, pretentious, pompous wench.
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| Re: Sitting Alone by Edna Sweetlove |
26-Feb-08/1:52 PM |
Lesbian manhater poetry? What utter rubbish.
You smell like someones embrowned poop deck.
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| Re: Sosomizing My Way Into Heaven by Bachus |
28-Dec-07/11:38 PM |
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Despicable and utterly delightful. Those saved for a dead god musn't be wasted. That would be a real sin that should be prevented.
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