poemranker ::20 most recent comments by SupremeDreamer (141-160) and replies

Comments bySupremeDreamer, 141–160 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Love doesn't cure IV injections of hate. by SupremeDreamer 31 May 2008, 8:49 PM
Hah.
on Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar 31 May 2008, 1:35 PM
incense.
on it is my turn this season by daniella 31 May 2008, 1:33 PM
"and pluck the grapes for to drink my own cup
my own handful of cherry red sweet wine."

I suggest:

and pluck the grapes for my own cup
of red sweet wine."

Also check punctuation, capitalize the I's, etc. Aside from all that, not bad... Think the title could be better though.
replying on Unsung American Dream by SupremeDreamer 31 May 2008, 1:28 PM
And your an ugly lesbian. Everyone has their issues. :P
on sperladnik by malpaso 31 May 2008, 1:26 PM
um... Genius? I'm not sure. No vote at this time.
on Fuck stupid chemistry labs by jauser 31 May 2008, 1:25 PM
Chemistry is cool when you learn it on your own... bathtub intoxicants are the cure for a dull soul!!!
on In All My Dreams by forsaken 30 May 2008, 12:33 PM
Oh, Btw FAGGOT: Your no longer on the best list. ;) Fucking loser.
on In All My Dreams by forsaken 30 May 2008, 12:24 PM
swollow - SWALLOW....FUCK MAN.

Can't you fucking use spellcheck.net? Your writing is fucking gay... even gayer is that you just vote for yourself... you know what? Zero bomb time. I've just fucking had it with morons like you.
on Sim Saladin by bonjoo 30 May 2008, 12:22 PM
caressed.

Plus, it'd be a lot better if you said "towelheads".

Headtowels sound very gay.
on Love by dark wiccan 30 May 2008, 12:19 PM
Idealistic Emo Goo is what killed your relationship, you sad little bitch boi!!! Now stop loving and go masturbate with a razor.
on Why should i care to be here by dark wiccan 30 May 2008, 12:18 PM
Shut up and slit your wrists already, loser.
on Memories by dark wiccan 30 May 2008, 12:16 PM
You suck emo boy... maybe that's what she got tired of, you know, the unstable sensitivity? EH? Maybe she wanted a guy with like, balls? Yeah, a tougher sort of guy who won't cry and be gentle when he fucks her. The sort of guy who'll grab her ass in a rough manner and ram his rod with a viciousness to match her wanting while talking dirty, calling her a little fucking WHORE.
on Because of me by dark wiccan 30 May 2008, 12:12 PM
Oh - My - Fucking - God...

You are so fucking emo that it makes me want to barf... just go ahead and kill yourself you pathetic fuck. PLEASE????
on Modern Stupidity by nentwined 30 May 2008, 12:06 PM
Geeku!!! Geekliscious.
on Explain him by misused 29 Apr 2008, 3:23 AM
Crap.
on ADDICTION by kristie24 29 Apr 2008, 3:19 AM
*tear
I've

Now this is SHIT. Absolute shit. I thought this was a poem, not your typical NA pamplet or state sponsored BULLSHIT.

With all this drug abuse, you couldn't delude yourself into being "creative"? Or is this what you call the apex of creativity for you?
on On Youth Revisited by vulcan 29 Apr 2008, 3:16 AM
No.
replying on Death of a Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer 12 Mar 2008, 3:12 PM
Transexual dykes such as yourself make it difficult for anyone to breathe, you ugly, pretentious, pompous wench.
on Sitting Alone by Edna Sweetlove 26 Feb 2008, 1:52 PM
Lesbian manhater poetry? What utter rubbish.
You smell like someones embrowned poop deck.
on Sosomizing My Way Into Heaven by Bachus 28 Dec 2007, 11:38 PM
Despicable and utterly delightful. Those saved for a dead god musn't be wasted. That would be a real sin that should be prevented.