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Why should i care to be here (Free verse) by dark wiccan
Why should i care to be here? Nothing to be proud of in my life. All the shame of my wrong-doings Tears at me more and more. I wasn't always like this It happened when my soul left for you. I have seen past the happiness in life. All the words that i said i can't take back. I can't hold you Or tell you that i love you anymore. This brings me to my knees Crying for you to be there. I can't comfort you When someone brings you down And it shatters my heart. I can't stand the thing that ive become. My life is full of broken hearted misery and pain. Why should i care to be here?

Up the ladder: Stark St. Blues.
Down the ladder: I found you.

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11483
Posted: May 13, 2008 5:30 AM PDT; Last modified: May 13, 2008 5:30 AM PDT
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[0] SupremeDreamer @ 69.236.69.24 | 30-May-08/12:18 PM | Reply
Shut up and slit your wrists already, loser.
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