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ADDICTION (Other) by kristie24
ADDICTION!! Its got more power than the HARDEST punch... More pull than the STRONGEST man... It DESTROYS lives and TARES you apart... If you fall into its hands!! Its AIM.. to find your WEAKNESS... And then it just feeds off it... Until the only thing your thinking about... IS WHEN,WHERE or HOW you'll get your next HIT!! It takes over every part of you life... Your MIND.. BODY.. and SOUL... It drags you so far under... AS its EVILNESS takes its TOLL!! The STRONGEST people iv seen it STAND OVER.. Its like it just CLAIMS your SOUL... For something so SMALL its hard to believe.. How it could have so much CONTROL!!!

Down the ladder: Winter on the Moon

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Overall Rank: 11517
Posted: April 22, 2008 8:42 PM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2008 8:49 PM PDT
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[0] SupremeDreamer @ | 29-Apr-08/3:19 AM | Reply

Now this is SHIT. Absolute shit. I thought this was a poem, not your typical NA pamplet or state sponsored BULLSHIT.

With all this drug abuse, you couldn't delude yourself into being "creative"? Or is this what you call the apex of creativity for you?
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