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Sim Saladin (Free verse) by bonjoo
Enslaved in sand,
squatting in nests,
oppressive lands,
females corressed.
Headtowels face east,
or bowels maimed,
praying for peace,
holding a knife, blood-stained.
Strap on those sticks,
and don that rag gown,
all non-believers pricks,
their skin not even half brown.
"Allahu Akbar!"
"Allahu Akbar!"
Now going to Virgins,
but not the megastore.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.5
Weighted score: 5.1659904
Overall Rank: 5077
Posted: May 12, 2008 1:12 AM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2008 1:12 AM PDT
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Plus, it'd be a lot better if you said "towelheads".
Headtowels sound very gay.