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Sim Saladin (Free verse) by bonjoo

Enslaved in sand, squatting in nests, oppressive lands, females corressed. Headtowels face east, or bowels maimed, praying for peace, holding a knife, blood-stained. Strap on those sticks, and don that rag gown, all non-believers pricks, their skin not even half brown. "Allahu Akbar!" "Allahu Akbar!" Now going to Virgins, but not the megastore.

SupremeDreamer 30-May-08/12:22 PM
caressed.

Plus, it'd be a lot better if you said "towelheads".

Headtowels sound very gay.




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