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Explain him (Free verse) by misused
Did you ever feel like crying knowing that it wouldnt get you any where? Did you ever look into someones eyes and say a little prayer? Did you ever look into someones heart, wishing you were there? Did you ever watch someone walk away,not wanting them to go? Did you whisper,"God I love you" but never let them know? You cry at night,in misery and almost go insane, Nothing in this world causes so much pain. If I could choose between love and death, I think i'd rather die! Love hurts and the price you pay is high, So i say "Don't fall in love" it'll hurt before it's through. You see,my friend i ought to know, because I fell in and out of love with you now, because I fell in and out of love with you

Down the ladder: Shadow

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8888
Posted: April 22, 2008 8:32 PM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2008 8:32 PM PDT
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[0] SupremeDreamer @ 69.236.82.255 | 29-Apr-08/3:23 AM | Reply
Crap.
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