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Beetles (Free verse) by cheese.doodles
Stones That Come alive Nightmarishly Under our feet Dying With a terrible Crunch.

Up the ladder: Lonely Hearts
Down the ladder: Dance in my Golden Shower

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.875
Weighted score: 5.5042653
Overall Rank: 2669
Posted: April 30, 2007 3:11 PM PDT; Last modified: April 30, 2007 3:11 PM PDT
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[6] half.italian @ 76.172.249.205 | 5-May-07/11:30 AM | Reply
Beatles

Brothers
making music that
ignites souls

Teaching
us of love, peace, and
Drugs.
[10] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 17-May-07/8:46 AM | Reply
Excellent. I hate treading on things - like, you know, the earth.
[0] SupremeDreamer @ 192.220.136.137 | 27-Jul-07/1:28 PM | Reply
You are a sad little shithead. A pathetic self promoter. It's absolutely self-defeating to anonymously vote favoribly for yourself, since it shows just how much you, as an insecure twat, seek to boost your esteem through empty illusion.

Naturally, of course, your also a strong supporter of the politically correct movement, [PCM- a.k.a: Putrid Cock Mongers.] since you happily zeroed two pieces of mine- one which dealt with golden showers and the other which made use of the word "nigger".

In short, sir- or rather should I say Child? You are a dullard who is found wanting. To me, you are the beetle I found crushed beneath my Jesus sandled feet.

Good-day. Blessed with zero.

[BTW: If it will assuage your puny ego, you can go ahead and zero bomb my whole collection if you like. Just remember to scream in bloody ecstasy "Hail Rockmage!!" each time you click submit with your molested shit-c-licker.]
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