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Pulling the hill (formerly-in response to) (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
I've forgotten the value of momentum. My drive for poetry
has become a slow road that is not on any map.
A Cicada crashes onto my hood, quickly rights itself
and flies away, my eyes trailing it to the eight percent
upgrade in front of me. Quickly I burp the brakes
and backpedal dropping two three four gears
just to catch ground. It is difficult to manuever
my bulky conveyance through these tight corners.
Sight distance is limited and reminders flash like
construction markers in the night.
Puritans scowl at me as I pass their tidy little boxes.
The fingering trees flick my antennae and I snatch
the wheel back from the edge, correcting, overcorrecting
splitting hairs and gears, my hands blistering
from the constant friction.
There is a clearing here, somewhere, with a straighter road
through an open meadow where a small toll bridge waits.
I will pay, sigh, look at the next hill and grin.
And remember to keep my foot in it.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4932
Posted: September 11, 2007 9:00 AM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2007 9:00 AM PDT
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