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Stark St. Blues. (Senryu) by SupremeDreamer I sleep on streets all
while fucking off my sad life;
killer with a keen blade.
Up the ladder:
Postcard Made of Pain
Down the ladder:
Why should i care to be here
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Posted: July 27, 2007 1:08 PM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2007 1:53 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.762871 Overall Rank: 11482 Comments:
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Note: since this is not a haiku in the traditional sense, without natural imagery, its only haiku attribute being the 5-7-5 syllable format, I decided to dub it a "Faiku". In other words: Don't bother telling me this "Haiku" doesn't follow rigid tradition. I am fully fucking aware of the fact.
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