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Stark St. Blues. (Senryu) by SupremeDreamer

I sleep on streets all while fucking off my sad life; killer with a keen blade.

SupremeDreamer 27-Jul-07/1:08 PM
Note: since this is not a haiku in the traditional sense, without natural imagery, its only haiku attribute being the 5-7-5 syllable format, I decided to dub it a "Faiku". In other words: Don't bother telling me this "Haiku" doesn't follow rigid tradition. I am fully fucking aware of the fact.

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