| Re: Wake me up before you go by INTRANSIT |
27-Jul-03/6:46 PM |
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LMAO.. this sounded like a recorded dialogue between my two friends Robert and Nicole.. jesus christ, i couldnt stop laughin.. you got yourself a ten.
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| Re: Little Somethings by emeraldskies |
27-Jul-03/7:27 PM |
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your now an adult.. not your fault, blame society, its easy. 7.
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| Re: summer feeling by nolan |
28-Jul-03/1:16 AM |
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online journal or a poem? i cant tell the difference.
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28-Jul-03/12:51 PM |
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I liked this, soothing flow and feel. Good Job. 9.
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| Re: The Set Back by horus8 |
28-Jul-03/3:37 PM |
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WAHOO! Heil HORUS! LEAD ME MY GENERAL! ONWARDS ONWARDS, TWARDS THE FUTURE.. i like the pictures though.. ;P 10.
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| Re: The plains of Africa by horus8 |
28-Jul-03/3:44 PM |
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Nice. Discovery channel narrative.. i enjoyed the read. 9.
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| Re: unlucky burglar, unlucky me by cacophony |
28-Jul-03/3:49 PM |
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Aye, home protection kicks ass.. ;) 8.
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29-Jul-03/1:45 AM |
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Well, its a good read, but it didnt strike my fancy.. btw i came up with a cigar flavor for ice cream, i was thinking of calling it cubans.. ;P 8.
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| Re: Infection by nocturnalism |
29-Jul-03/1:54 AM |
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cmon..i got the idea but you could of had more imagination with the presentation, it left me with a sensation of emptiness..5.
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| Re: Infection by nocturnalism |
29-Jul-03/2:01 AM |
Once apon a midnight moon
came a baker
a night walker
salt shaker, wavin her cheeks
hasnt showered in two weeks
I watched my friend pay
30 bucks thrown away
he pressed his lips
against her vertical smile
he ended up in a pool of bile
puking sour dough
There.. not the best rewrite, but i think it tops your piece nevertheless. ;)
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| Re: A Simple Emote. by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
29-Jul-03/2:03 AM |
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I liked the presentation.. 7.
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| Re: Despair by marjan |
29-Jul-03/2:05 AM |
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i dont like the way you decided to present this thing, looks as if you were having seizures when you put this together.
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| Re: HANDRINOS IS A HUMOURLESS PRIG by walrus8 |
30-Jul-03/6:40 PM |
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eh... wtf. ok.. not sure what this is even sposed to be buts its stupid nontheless.
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30-Jul-03/6:52 PM |
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Brit, please now.. dont be such a sensitive bitch.. like horus said, dont write for us.. write for yourself, and when we slam it into a wastebasket, come back and write better, but dont write just to please us.. thats pointless, and will make me piss on your head even more. ok?
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| Re: And so the spider spun by horus8 |
30-Jul-03/7:24 PM |
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well, thom got sucked dry from horus8 the eight legged spider, and i smile wider in laughter, splashing in water, a child gone astray, named stinky! hehe. great job. 8.
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| Re: plagiarism txt by daniella |
30-Jul-03/7:54 PM |
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| Re: The difference between the two -=Dark_Angel=-'s by horus8 |
30-Jul-03/8:14 PM |
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ahhh.. burning blood and gore curdles in the mornin for breakfast.. yeah..
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30-Jul-03/9:19 PM |
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ah lifeboatman, i told you before, i killed cain!!! he went home a long time ago! ;P 10. wonderfull.. did that chat about cain on irc inspire you?
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| Re: Brittanyy by JoyLuck |
30-Jul-03/11:19 PM |
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| Re: Billy Bob Jo by Inconceivable_Dreams |
31-Jul-03/1:02 AM |
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