| Re: My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams |
31-Jul-03/1:06 AM |
the repetition.. is a bit redundant. 6
|
|
|
 |
| Re: Mi Casa es Su Casa by <~> |
31-Jul-03/1:11 AM |
|
|
|
| Re: Border Crashing by JoyLuck |
31-Jul-03/2:23 AM |
|
need a tic tac for the alcohol breath? hehe. good work man. 9
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-03/4:01 AM |
|
hrmm.. is this a poem about brittany? heh. not too bad. 8
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-03/4:02 AM |
|
a bit cliche in my opinion. 6
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-03/4:05 AM |
hrmm. some of it is confusing, for instance:
Emotions of coal and eyes of lust,
Never has this, for you, been just. - not exactly sure what your trying to say.
ill hold my vote till later.
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-03/4:07 AM |
|
ahh.. well first off.. dont make my eyes run over the page, they already suck to begin with.. plus, you could be more creative talking about death. 4
|
|
|
|
| Re: Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer |
31-Jul-03/4:10 AM |
|
lol. nice. btw, deadication, did you intentionally spell it that way? seems like it, just wanted to make sure first before i say something stupid. 9
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
2-Aug-03/9:33 AM |
|
Well done.. made me shiver in disgust though.. dont mean that to be insultive. 10.
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
2-Aug-03/9:40 AM |
Ok, well, when you inserted that last line, it like, screwed the whole thing. Plus, again i have someone saying im a lesbian! oh well.. atleast people know i love women.. cept im a man, which makes lesbianism hard to pull off. Really, doing the feministic act would cause me to give myself OneFingerAnswer's 22 caliber lobotomy and render myself void and null in the universe.
I bless thee with an eight.
|
|
|
|
| Re: To My Future Wife by http://bandgeek |
2-Aug-03/9:44 AM |
|
lmao. well man, you no longer need my chemical twist to inject the funny potion into your work.. you suceeded beautifully. 10.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Clay Man by eliastemplar |
2-Aug-03/9:49 AM |
|
|
|
| Re: Charades by Thom |
2-Aug-03/9:50 AM |
|
bleh, bored me dead.. couldnt even finish the first two stanzas before i wanted to ram my skull into my monitor and electrify my soul.. 4
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
2-Aug-03/9:56 AM |
My birdie didnt go tweet tweet.. it went sheet sheet.. dont worry, i shut the fucker up with my letter opener in a poetic fit of rage and farted out a decent ode.
This you might consider stupid, but it made me laugh my ass off. 10.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit |
2-Aug-03/10:00 AM |
|
I enjoyed it.. blessed with 8
|
|
|
|
| Re: Malcontent by EAger to Offend |
2-Aug-03/11:35 AM |
insestors - webster doesn't recognize this word.. what is it sposed to mean? Same for uniquity.
other than that, this is a gigantic leap from your other works, im impressed. Blessed with 10
|
|
|
|
| Re: She Won't Wait by EAger to Offend |
2-Aug-03/11:41 AM |
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
2-Aug-03/1:37 PM |
|
prose, poetry, i dont give a shit what this is, i fucking LOVED it... beautiful.. ahh. ill stare at this a little while longer.. oh yeah, 10, you deserv it old man river
|
|
|
|
| Re: POEM XXII by DonCalo |
2-Aug-03/1:45 PM |
|
verboten.. forbidden love.. ah.. cool, i learned a new word. Nice poem, welcome to ranker ville. blessed with nine.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Mind Puddle by justjay |
2-Aug-03/1:57 PM |
|
cloths or clothes? take your pick. dont worry, i make a million spelling mistakes in a day. well done, i enjoyed reading it. 8
|
|
|
|
