| Re: Memorial Park by Mona Lisa |
14-Aug-03/2:51 AM |
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| Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
25-Jul-03/12:39 PM |
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| Re: My Angel of Darkness by goddessbyfire |
19-Jul-03/4:48 AM |
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a vivid and eclectic write let down by 'crimson' as a metaphor its a bit k-mart. 7
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| Re: Fall Of The Heartlands by Mr Pig |
4-Jul-03/4:15 AM |
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No dots are needed between JCB
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| Re: walking by Dangzter |
4-Jul-03/4:07 AM |
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Not crazy about this at all, the ends imaginative but it lacks interst and reeks of self importance 5
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| Re: Lycanthropes and L-dopamine by horus8 |
4-Jul-03/4:02 AM |
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Only you can do a Haiku with a title like this. Your f****g nuts but I'm nuts for your stuff 8
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| Re: Sunset Hands by Bachus |
28-Jun-03/10:22 AM |
You write so prolifically when do you get chance to eat? have sex? If I lived in CA i would be knocking golf balls of the tops of skyscrapers whilst listening to Verdi, or chilling out eating diaper dogs pretending i'm david hasslehoff.
ahh you guys have a great life or have i done too much soap?
Loved the anger in this, your so fucking in ya face kinda expressive maniac. 9
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| Re: Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
28-Jun-03/10:17 AM |
Liked a few lines big time,
but I can't take this in right now i'm so tired my eyes look like piss holes in the snow. 7
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| Re: a comment on Fusion by Kitch |
23-Jun-03/6:38 AM |
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you've all been so helpful since i joined p/r and thanks homies, (group hugs)
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| Re: The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8 |
23-Jun-03/6:37 AM |
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And God said let it rain 10s.
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| Re: Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig |
21-Jun-03/9:42 AM |
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| Re: A Love Story For The Dead by Caducus |
21-Jun-03/9:38 AM |
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| Re: Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8 |
21-Jun-03/9:37 AM |
Before I collapse of exhaustion please let me say : Yeah baby.
Your head should be a holiday destination I would be there with my Piz Buin and a pile of tabloids licking the suns lashes. 10
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| Re: a comment on The Bastard Earth by Kitch |
17-Jun-03/1:29 PM |
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Bishops ! I mean what the fuck are they? what do they do? other than conspire, rape, manipulate the very peace they are supposed to promote. Most of them are all fudgepackers with a penchant for ass trophy's. Those robes they wear would scare the shit out any child going to be 'initiated' fuck no, save our kids, preserve their innocence.
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| Re: a comment on The Bastard Earth by Kitch |
17-Jun-03/1:26 PM |
Noted !
and thanks for the suave advice I get it. By the way H8 i have a shit load of stuff still to enter which might be fat. When I have written a new poem I will let you know and you can see if its matured.
I wanna learn from the Yoda's of Poemranker so come on y'all help me out here, I'm a young buck in a strange town and I need some !
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| Re: Dressing up by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
17-Jun-03/9:06 AM |
Will i be handsome,
will i be rich,
here's what she said to me,
kay sara, sara,
whatever will be, will be
the futures not ours to see,
kay sara sara.
Is this a sequel if it is then cor blimey its great?
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| Re: Dressing up by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
17-Jun-03/9:05 AM |
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Didn't like it ! to much will i this and made me not care about living. 3
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| Re: Air sickness bag by Shardik |
17-Jun-03/9:01 AM |
Change line 10 to Twas about the time' I think it adds a bit more garlic to the salt the pygmies used.
Pretty funny
8 :-)
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| Re: Claustrophobia by INTRANSIT |
17-Jun-03/8:56 AM |
This could also be titled 'A Relationship' 7
Nice shorts by the way.
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| Re: Touchdown by Mona Lisa |
13-Jun-03/1:32 PM |
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Had to give this a twiceover and its very poignant, very proud and I loved it. 9
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