on Memorial Park by Mona Lisa
14 Aug 2003, 2:51 AM
Very nice
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
25 Jul 2003, 12:39 PM
AwEsOmE
on My Angel of Darkness by goddessbyfire
19 Jul 2003, 4:48 AM
a vivid and eclectic write let down by 'crimson' as a metaphor its a bit k-mart. 7
on Fall Of The Heartlands by Mr Pig
4 Jul 2003, 4:15 AM
No dots are needed between JCB
on Lycanthropes and L-dopamine by horus8
4 Jul 2003, 4:02 AM
Only you can do a Haiku with a title like this. Your f****g nuts but I'm nuts for your stuff 8
on Sunset Hands by Bachus
28 Jun 2003, 10:22 AM
You write so prolifically when do you get chance to eat? have sex? If I lived in CA i would be knocking golf balls of the tops of skyscrapers whilst listening to Verdi, or chilling out eating diaper dogs pretending i'm david hasslehoff.
ahh you guys have a great life or have i done too much soap?
Loved the anger in this, your so fucking in ya face kinda expressive maniac. 9
ahh you guys have a great life or have i done too much soap?
Loved the anger in this, your so fucking in ya face kinda expressive maniac. 9
on Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom
28 Jun 2003, 10:17 AM
Liked a few lines big time,
but I can't take this in right now i'm so tired my eyes look like piss holes in the snow. 7
but I can't take this in right now i'm so tired my eyes look like piss holes in the snow. 7
on The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8
23 Jun 2003, 6:37 AM
And God said let it rain 10s.
on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig
21 Jun 2003, 9:42 AM
Fuck !
on A Love Story For The Dead by Caducus
21 Jun 2003, 9:38 AM
Brilliant
on Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8
21 Jun 2003, 9:37 AM
Before I collapse of exhaustion please let me say : Yeah baby.
Your head should be a holiday destination I would be there with my Piz Buin and a pile of tabloids licking the suns lashes. 10
Your head should be a holiday destination I would be there with my Piz Buin and a pile of tabloids licking the suns lashes. 10
replying on The Bastard Earth by Kitch
17 Jun 2003, 1:29 PM
Bishops ! I mean what the fuck are they? what do they do? other than conspire, rape, manipulate the very peace they are supposed to promote. Most of them are all fudgepackers with a penchant for ass trophy's. Those robes they wear would scare the shit out any child going to be 'initiated' fuck no, save our kids, preserve their innocence.
replying on The Bastard Earth by Kitch
17 Jun 2003, 1:26 PM
Noted !
and thanks for the suave advice I get it. By the way H8 i have a shit load of stuff still to enter which might be fat. When I have written a new poem I will let you know and you can see if its matured.
I wanna learn from the Yoda's of Poemranker so come on y'all help me out here, I'm a young buck in a strange town and I need some !
and thanks for the suave advice I get it. By the way H8 i have a shit load of stuff still to enter which might be fat. When I have written a new poem I will let you know and you can see if its matured.
I wanna learn from the Yoda's of Poemranker so come on y'all help me out here, I'm a young buck in a strange town and I need some !
on Dressing up by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Jun 2003, 9:06 AM
Will i be handsome,
will i be rich,
here's what she said to me,
kay sara, sara,
whatever will be, will be
the futures not ours to see,
kay sara sara.
Is this a sequel if it is then cor blimey its great?
will i be rich,
here's what she said to me,
kay sara, sara,
whatever will be, will be
the futures not ours to see,
kay sara sara.
Is this a sequel if it is then cor blimey its great?
on Dressing up by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Jun 2003, 9:05 AM
Didn't like it ! to much will i this and made me not care about living. 3
on Air sickness bag by Shardik
17 Jun 2003, 9:01 AM
Change line 10 to Twas about the time' I think it adds a bit more garlic to the salt the pygmies used.
Pretty funny
8 :-)
Pretty funny
8 :-)
on Claustrophobia by INTRANSIT
17 Jun 2003, 8:56 AM
This could also be titled 'A Relationship' 7
Nice shorts by the way.
Nice shorts by the way.