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Free verse № 56714

My Angel of Darkness

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Jul 2003 · Edited 18 Nov 2003 · 7 comments

Feathers of black around me circle. My own Angel of Darkness with his brand of love. Clothed in robes of blood, with hair of the darkest black, his pale face proves the starkest contradiction. His hands of fire run down my spine, leaving behind his mark of possession. Erotic thoughts overtake my mind, as he leans down to give his immortal kiss. Sealing my fate, I place my hand in his. In return my body and soul he takes. He protects me as a lover should, and creates a raging fire in my blood. His great feathered wings stirring exotic sensations, mitigating all pain. As he overtakes me, the passion waxes hotter, and he casts a spell that cannot be broken. Possessed by an angel of darkness, a lover of the erotic. I look into his eyes and there I find escape. My angel of darkness, my soul he continues to take

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7 comments

[9] deleted user 19-Jul-03/12:10 AM Reply
I really like this poem :)
[8] richa 19-Jul-03/3:25 AM Reply
Like this poem, not much to grab onto in the way of context but nice images and no obvious holes in it
[7] SupremeDreamer 19-Jul-03/4:24 AM Reply
not bad, not bad at all. blessed with 7.
[7] Kitch 19-Jul-03/4:48 AM Reply
a vivid and eclectic write let down by 'crimson' as a metaphor its a bit k-mart. 7
[10] Druid_Girl_1984 21-Jul-03/6:57 PM Reply
hehe nice poem. tsh
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 21-Jul-03/7:26 PM Reply
poop.
[n/a] goddessbyfire 18-Nov-03/1:12 PM Reply
Revised this poem...changed the words up