| Re: a comment on Fate Sucks by Kitch |
12-Jun-03/1:11 PM |
Hey Horus8
I will never leave you alone with your prostitutes but point taken I know I have a lot to learn I'm 19 and I have come here to learn from the masters. Mona Lisa (who referred me) is scared of this site bless her ! I welsome any comment, insult, praise whatever bring it on...so long as i learn my souls up for sale.
thanks for your comment.
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| Re: Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
12-Jun-03/5:58 AM |
but still dusking? this makes little sense.
Apart form that its good. 6
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| Re: a comment on Fate Sucks by Kitch |
12-Jun-03/5:54 AM |
I agree Robert a 6 is fair. I wrote this a while ago and I wish I found this site when most of my work was written because i rate critique as it improves you as a writer so thanks for your comment.
Please tell me the lines you liked and the ones that are a waste of time.
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| Re: a comment on This aint love, its shit by Kitch |
12-Jun-03/4:07 AM |
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Heeker? please explain its meaning
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| Re: Love by simone_girard |
12-Jun-03/2:25 AM |
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| Re: My girl by simone_girard |
12-Jun-03/2:04 AM |
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Uhhhh Babyhood it sounds like its his weener. On the other hand this is undeserving of its 'worst' poem on p/r so heres a 5 so get the party poppers and cocktail sausages we're having ourselves a PARTY ! ! ! !!
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| Re: Unmasking Wyverns by horus8 |
12-Jun-03/1:50 AM |
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Rich in detail, well written but it just aint my cup cake. Heres a 6 not your fault I licked the wrong parts.
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| Re: The Drunkest ever by horus8 |
12-Jun-03/1:48 AM |
I drink to die !
Probably the most apt and honest line of drinking I have ever read. Your nuts but I gotta love ya 8
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
12-Jun-03/1:46 AM |
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Great idea and well written too.
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| Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
12-Jun-03/1:45 AM |
Where did you see my Father we miss him terribly?
DA, this is hilarious but out of respect I never laughed. 8
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| Re: A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm |
12-Jun-03/1:43 AM |
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Pretty damn fine pie mam. 7
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| Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
12-Jun-03/1:39 AM |
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Strong and powerful reminiscence piece. Excellent
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