Re: The Pain by silver	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
I've said it before.... more!
Re: Avian Child by Tekara	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Wings up! Open skies!
Re: These things that we bury by Jody Conn	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
it stumbles in the execution, but is better writ than I could have done.
Re: Sugar Coating by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
An around-the-corner image. Almost as twisted as the pill itself, I'm sure.
Re: Breeze In Spring by Jody Conn	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Seductive in it's rhythm.
Re: A Moment in Time by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Spectacular.
Re: the absent-minded walk on the proverbial mountainside of nothingness + my mother's old tampons by skaskowski	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
meter and rhyme can redeem many subjects.
Re: The Baby Sponge by ruella	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
This would have been great, if it was not scientifically inaccurate.
Re: To walk in a dream in a dream by mozac	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
This dances.
Re: Social Parody by skaskowski	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
I must be slow again today. I don't get it. Or is it supposed to be pointless? I am clueless.
Re: Homecoming by ObiWonKn	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Beautiful imagery.
Re: Question of the day by PooP	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Interesting, poetry as commentary... hm..
Re: Vituperation by crims0ngh0st	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Imagery much better, has that vicious edge to it.
Re: A Vision of Dark Desire by crims0ngh0st	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
I would expect this subject to have sharper conflicts in it's imagery.
Re: Beloved Infidel by ObiWonKn	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
I must be slow... I don't get the point.
Re: Birth by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Good. Finally, the proper conflict of imager that haiku depend on.
Re: Enigma by BadPoet	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
*laughter*
Re: One Word by T. Becquerel	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
This is a form I use sometimes, and is well executed but the last/solution line is a little awkward.