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Breeze In Spring (Free verse) by Jody Conn
Scented like a breeze in spring. This fragrant fragile flower. She pacifies and comforts me hour upon hour Shining like a summer moon An exquisite sweet bouquet I yearn to feel her kiss and touch Throughout my night and day My thoughts are always focused on The next time I may reach her To lie again at night beside This seductive lovely creature jc062001
Down the ladder: wrenched away from what?
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Overall Rank: 1346
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST
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Comments:
[1]... anonymous @ | 24-Jun-01/7:38 PM | Reply
I identify with this one.
[1]... anonymous @ | 27-Jun-01/6:33 PM | Reply
very loving flows well, she's a lucky girl
[1]... anonymous @ | 29-Jun-01/3:35 PM | Reply
some rich sound
[1]... anonymous @ | 2-Jul-01/8:20 AM | Reply
Lose the flower/hour rhyme. Otherwise not too bad!
[n/a] nentwined @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
The rhythm on this really works for me. Not too monotonous, but very flowing. Maybe a little simple, but pretty.
[n/a] ifni @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
Seductive in it's rhythm.
[10] MissEmma84 @ 131.191.17.32 | 8-Jul-02/6:25 AM | Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 @ 131.191.17.32 | 8-Jul-02/6:25 AM | Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 @ 131.191.17.32 | 8-Jul-02/6:25 AM | Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 @ 131.191.17.32 | 8-Jul-02/6:26 AM | Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 @ 131.191.17.32 | 8-Jul-02/6:26 AM | Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 @ 131.191.17.32 | 8-Jul-02/6:26 AM | Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 @ 131.191.17.32 | 8-Jul-02/6:28 AM | Reply
good job
[7] purplestain @ 202.184.25.6 | 11-Jul-02/5:05 AM | Reply
beautiful..and almost romantic
[9] deleted user @ 152.163.188.229 | 14-Jul-02/6:25 PM | Reply
This is quite a good piece. Well written.
[9] deleted user @ 152.163.188.229 | 14-Jul-02/6:25 PM | Reply
This is quite a good piece. Well written.
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