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Free verse № 303

Breeze In Spring

by Jody Conn

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 16 comments

Scented like a breeze in spring. This fragrant fragile flower. She pacifies and comforts me hour upon hour Shining like a summer moon An exquisite sweet bouquet I yearn to feel her kiss and touch Throughout my night and day My thoughts are always focused on The next time I may reach her To lie again at night beside This seductive lovely creature jc062001

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16 comments

[1] anonymous 24-Jun-01/7:38 PM Reply
I identify with this one.
[1] anonymous 27-Jun-01/6:33 PM Reply
very loving flows well, she's a lucky girl
[1] anonymous 29-Jun-01/3:35 PM Reply
some rich sound
[1] anonymous 2-Jul-01/8:20 AM Reply
Lose the flower/hour rhyme. Otherwise not too bad!
[n/a] nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply
The rhythm on this really works for me. Not too monotonous, but very flowing. Maybe a little simple, but pretty.
[n/a] ifni 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply
Seductive in it's rhythm.
[10] MissEmma84 8-Jul-02/6:25 AM Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 8-Jul-02/6:25 AM Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 8-Jul-02/6:25 AM Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 8-Jul-02/6:26 AM Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 8-Jul-02/6:26 AM Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 8-Jul-02/6:26 AM Reply
good job
[10] MissEmma84 8-Jul-02/6:28 AM Reply
good job
[7] purplestain 11-Jul-02/5:05 AM Reply
beautiful..and almost romantic
[9] deleted user 14-Jul-02/6:25 PM Reply
This is quite a good piece. Well written.
[9] deleted user 14-Jul-02/6:25 PM Reply
This is quite a good piece. Well written.