Re: Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus	17-Sep-02/8:52 AM
One can admire the work without admiring the sentiment. A worthy lesson, at least.
Re: Spellbound by Limness	17-Sep-02/8:49 AM
Not only a beautiful sentiment, but flawlessly executed as well.
Re: A Man Of The World by vulcan	17-Sep-02/8:48 AM
I wonder how many stories about green fairies this poem has engendered.
Re: Raining in Dream by memorybabe	17-Sep-02/8:46 AM
There's a lot of detrius in the beginning of this; meaningless phrases. Perhaps your intended effect; but it shrouds the meaning you're heading for in the second half.
Re: a comment on Cliche by ifni	17-Sep-02/8:38 AM
It's the date with my initials. Copyright info.
Re: To You by Cha no Onna	11-Sep-02/11:48 PM
I rather liked stanza 4. But then I guess I'm into odd line breaks.
Re: a comment on Love Cuts by ifni	11-Sep-02/10:14 PM
Yeah. At least I've grown a little in the intervening 5 years. =P
Re: My Life as a Book by molly	10-Aug-02/9:28 PM
clear imagery, good encapsulation of the moment. =)
Re: Earthquake by ifni	24-Jun-02/6:11 PM
The poem is about stopping to think; a difficult word is intended to enhance that effect. =)
Re: Assassin's Song by Tekara	19-May-02/10:29 PM
Hmm.. I wonder if I know this person, too?
Re: pull by skaskowski	16-May-02/5:53 PM
very evocative.
Re: Cour by Cha no Onna	9-May-02/7:16 PM
It's not because you no longer care, but because you no longer _fear_ . =)
Re: (untitled) by Mystifying	21-Apr-02/2:05 PM
Arg! Line wrap!!
Re: Human self pity by Service	21-Apr-02/2:00 PM
moments of clarity through a general incomprehensibility.
Re: For fun by Cha no Onna	17-Apr-02/7:18 PM
*snicker* two-fiddy, two-fiddy.
Re: Waiting to understand by Cha no Onna	17-Apr-02/7:17 PM
just, so. yeah.
Re: Ifni's birthday by Cha no Onna	14-Apr-02/3:50 PM
Ok, so maybe I _am_ damn cute sometimes. =P Only you would have immortalized it in a haiku. =)
Re: The Secret by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
*nods*
Re: Sleep does my eyes by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Why does so much of your poetry sound like music to me?
Re: Apathy by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Dances.