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Earthquake (Free verse) by ifni "the earth moves,
under my feet"
- like an ocean,
vast unknown,
right here, beneath us;
contemplate the possible fecundities
that slumber, trapped,
'neath concrete, steel,
and hubris.
5.14.02 JV
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Posted: May 14, 2002 1:35 PM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2002 1:35 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.6063533 Overall Rank: 12487 Comments:
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24-Jun-02/2:32 AM
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One suggestion: "fecundity" is a slightly obscure word, and there are many words that mean the same thing that are more common.
that's beautiful. think about the moving electrons in the atoms that make up your body. nothing is still and everything is changing.
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