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Earthquake
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Free verse
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ifni
"the earth moves, under my feet" - like an ocean, vast unknown, right here, beneath us; contemplate the possible fecundities that slumber, trapped, 'neath concrete, steel, and hubris. 5.14.02 JV
zapevaj
24-Jun-02/2:32 AM
One suggestion: "fecundity" is a slightly obscure word, and there are many words that mean the same thing that are more common.
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