rainfall saga 7

by Bill Z Bub

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Oct 2003 · 12 comments

at last at last at last at last at last at last at last at last rain at last rain fall saga rain

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12 comments

[9] http://mulberryfairy 23-Oct-03/8:39 PM Reply

I imagine this series as an oral performance, and though I don't get it all, I appreciate it. The "recent" lineup here is full of weather poems tonight.

[n/a] Bill Z Bub › http://mulberryfairy 23-Oct-03/9:42 PM Reply

aye, it's a puzzle.

[5] EAger to Offend 23-Oct-03/9:29 PM Reply

I guess we've lost you,Bub. I love nature. I love nature poems. But,
I almost
fell
asleep ...reading

THIS>

[n/a] Bill Z Bub › EAger to Offend 23-Oct-03/9:33 PM Reply

well, it's supposed to be soothing...

ps I am not lost, I am experimenting. I'm no old pro, I'm still searching.

[n/a] richa › Bill Z Bub 24-Oct-03/12:48 AM Reply

Difficult to write a soothing poem when the reader needs to do so much work following it.

[n/a] Bill Z Bub 23-Oct-03/10:32 PM Reply

interesting. Editing does not wipe out votes?

[n/a] abecedarian 23-Oct-03/11:58 PM Reply

Gonna need help Bill. smile 1, lure 1 , fingers 2, thundering 3, rain 5, at last 8 (intentional golden section? 1,1,2,3,5,8) but that's all I got.

[n/a] Bill Z Bub › abecedarian 24-Oct-03/5:51 AM Reply

Interesting. The only real "puzzle" is in the title. Aside from the resemblance to jigsaws.

[5] EAger to Offend 24-Oct-03/5:59 AM Reply

Hey! This is much better. I'll bump you up to a five.

[0] poetandknowit 24-Oct-03/6:27 PM Reply

What the hell did you guys smoke in Niagara? Was it you that jumped the falls and survived. Did you bang your head? Did you?

[n/a] god'swife 24-Oct-03/6:35 PM Reply

Again, you're holding back. I'm glad to see someone experiment, but as far as this lab rat goes, the prize IS the trip through the maze. This maze is nowhere, try again.

At last At last At last

You've got The Magic 3 working for you here
Don't foul it up by chanting beyond what's reasonable.

[10] FreeFormFixation 19-Aug-08/8:14 PM Reply

sounds like rain to me, i like it