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rainfall saga 7 (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub
at last at last at last at last at last at last at last at last rain at last rain fall saga rain

Up the ladder: Mike Pike!!
Down the ladder: Earthquake

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2222223
Weighted score: 4.611111
Overall Rank: 12446
Posted: October 23, 2003 7:56 PM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2003 7:56 PM PDT
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Comments:
[9] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.144.174 | 23-Oct-03/8:39 PM | Reply
I imagine this series as an oral performance, and though I don't get it all, I appreciate it. The "recent" lineup here is full of weather poems tonight.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.43.48.67 > http://mulberryfairy | 23-Oct-03/9:42 PM | Reply
aye, it's a puzzle.
[5] EAger to Offend @ 65.95.125.137 | 23-Oct-03/9:29 PM | Reply
I guess we've lost you,Bub. I love nature. I love nature poems. But,
I almost
fell
asleep ...reading

THIS>
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.43.48.67 > EAger to Offend | 23-Oct-03/9:33 PM | Reply
well, it's supposed to be soothing...

ps I am not lost, I am experimenting. I'm no old pro, I'm still searching.
[n/a] richa @ 81.86.245.108 > Bill Z Bub | 24-Oct-03/12:48 AM | Reply
Difficult to write a soothing poem when the reader needs to do so much work following it.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.43.48.67 | 23-Oct-03/10:32 PM | Reply
interesting. Editing does not wipe out votes?
[n/a] abecedarian @ 4.40.32.229 | 23-Oct-03/11:58 PM | Reply
Gonna need help Bill. smile 1, lure 1 , fingers 2, thundering 3, rain 5, at last 8 (intentional golden section? 1,1,2,3,5,8) but that's all I got.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.43.48.67 > abecedarian | 24-Oct-03/5:51 AM | Reply
Interesting. The only real "puzzle" is in the title. Aside from the resemblance to jigsaws.
[5] EAger to Offend @ 65.95.242.91 | 24-Oct-03/5:59 AM | Reply
Hey! This is much better. I'll bump you up to a five.
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.63 | 24-Oct-03/6:27 PM | Reply
What the hell did you guys smoke in Niagara? Was it you that jumped the falls and survived. Did you bang your head? Did you?
[n/a] god'swife @ 67.73.32.247 | 24-Oct-03/6:35 PM | Reply
Again, you're holding back. I'm glad to see someone experiment, but as far as this lab rat goes, the prize IS the trip through the maze. This maze is nowhere, try again.

At last At last At last


You've got The Magic 3 working for you here
Don't foul it up by chanting beyond what's reasonable.

[10] FreeFormFixation @ 98.212.148.58 | 19-Aug-08/8:14 PM | Reply
sounds like rain to me, i like it
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