| Re: For fun by Cha no Onna |
17-Apr-02/7:18 PM |
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*snicker* two-fiddy, two-fiddy.
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| Re: Human self pity by Service |
21-Apr-02/2:00 PM |
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moments of clarity through a general incomprehensibility.
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| Re: (untitled) by Mystifying |
21-Apr-02/2:05 PM |
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1-May-02/2:55 PM |
and notice that it was written two days before 9/11. Coincidence, sure. But I usually don't write poems about my premonitions. =P
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This is like an "aftershock" of Burning Night, right? I think the funny thing is that woodsmoke is such a comforting smell to most people.
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1-May-02/2:58 PM |
Very like. I was trying to keep up on a "100 poems in 100 days" LiveJournal. It'd been 5 or 6 days since I visited last... and I was a little frustrated. *laughter*
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Sounds like a creative writing class I once attended. Ten haiku a session for nine weeks. Ugh!
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6-May-02/10:53 PM |
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guess you have to be here to understand the power of the rain. very cool.
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6-May-02/10:54 PM |
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powerful. so many strive for this literary bent and fail. You do it as naturally as breathing.
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| Re: Cour by Cha no Onna |
9-May-02/7:16 PM |
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It's not because you no longer care, but because you no longer _fear_ . =)
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16-May-02/5:53 PM |
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mmm... off beat. In a left field kind of way. Made me stop for a second.
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| Re: pull by skaskowski |
16-May-02/5:53 PM |
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| Re: Assassin's Song by Tekara |
19-May-02/10:29 PM |
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Hmm.. I wonder if I know this person, too?
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| Re: Earthquake by ifni |
24-Jun-02/6:11 PM |
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The poem is about stopping to think; a difficult word is intended to enhance that effect. =)
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17-Jul-02/2:32 PM |
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It's about my job - I transcribe for a Neurology clinic; so his words are always describing the patients' pains.
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17-Jul-02/2:34 PM |
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the image of the candle is supposed to invoke the paradox of light against the darkness (relief of his pain) versus the traditional end of a moth and a candle - destruction. Relieving his pain will destroy him. yah?
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| Re: My Life as a Book by molly |
10-Aug-02/9:28 PM |
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clear imagery, good encapsulation of the moment. =)
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| Re: To You by Cha no Onna |
11-Sep-02/11:48 PM |
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I rather liked stanza 4. But then I guess I'm into odd line breaks.
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| Re: Raining in Dream by memorybabe |
17-Sep-02/8:46 AM |
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There's a lot of detrius in the beginning of this; meaningless phrases. Perhaps your intended effect; but it shrouds the meaning you're heading for in the second half.
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| Re: A Man Of The World by vulcan |
17-Sep-02/8:48 AM |
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I wonder how many stories about green fairies this poem has engendered.
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| Re: Spellbound by Limness |
17-Sep-02/8:49 AM |
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Not only a beautiful sentiment, but flawlessly executed as well.
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| Re: Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus |
17-Sep-02/8:52 AM |
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One can admire the work without admiring the sentiment. A worthy lesson, at least.
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