Re: Beloved Infidel by ObiWonKn	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
I must be slow... I don't get the point.
Re: Birth by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Good. Finally, the proper conflict of imager that haiku depend on.
Re: The Baby Sponge by ruella	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
This would have been great, if it was not scientifically inaccurate.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Unresolved image: what is lying in that room supposed to evoke?
Re: A Moment in Time by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Spectacular.
Re: the absent-minded walk on the proverbial mountainside of nothingness + my mother's old tampons by skaskowski	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
meter and rhyme can redeem many subjects.
Re: Sugar Coating by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
An around-the-corner image. Almost as twisted as the pill itself, I'm sure.
Re: Breeze In Spring by Jody Conn	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Seductive in it's rhythm.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Good image - you probably don't need "nice" in the first stanza.
Re: These things that we bury by Jody Conn	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
it stumbles in the execution, but is better writ than I could have done.
Re: Avian Child by Tekara	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Wings up! Open skies!
Re: The Pain by silver	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
I've said it before.... more!
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
*laughter*
Re: Apathy by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Dances.
Re: Sleep does my eyes by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Why does so much of your poetry sound like music to me?
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Thank you.
Re: The Secret by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
*nods*
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
I actually use a method like this for story ideas. But how literally did you mean this poem?
Re: Ifni's birthday by Cha no Onna	14-Apr-02/3:50 PM
Ok, so maybe I _am_ damn cute sometimes. =P Only you would have immortalized it in a haiku. =)
Re: Waiting to understand by Cha no Onna	17-Apr-02/7:17 PM
just, so. yeah.