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A Moment in Time (Free verse) by nentwined
With these lines I do entwine
you, your mind,
a moment in time
with
subtle fragrance of memory,
with the lover's kiss of rain,
with the
seeds of futures yet to come
blowing in the wind.
Strong arms softly
clench you tight
and whisper one more wish "good night".
Fingers gently
stroke your cheek,
guiding consciousness to sleep.
Ev'ry shooting star
is a hundred wishes made;
every single moment
is a wetly glist'ning
blade
of grass
swaying in the wind,
with the seeds of futures yet to
come,
the lover's kiss of rain,
with these lines I do entwine --
you,
your mind,
and a moment in time.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9565215
Weighted score: 6.9565096
Overall Rank: 149
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST
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