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Sugar Coating

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 8 comments

Sugar coated candy pill, wrapped with love and good intentions, makes you soft and sick and simple -- slap your head and twist your dimples.

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8 comments

[n/a] ifni 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

An around-the-corner image. Almost as twisted as the pill itself, I'm sure.

[5] anonymous 10-Sep-01/4:09 AM Reply

this is just too good... and real...

[5] anonymous 10-May-02/9:12 AM Reply

i don't even know what to say about this one

[5] anonymous 17-May-02/11:03 PM Reply

I really like this one, it makes me all exstatic :)

[n/a] razorgrin 10-Jul-02/2:07 PM Reply

good.

[8] Christof 20-Aug-02/7:03 AM Reply

I like the kick in the face at the end - a real wake-up to the emotionally deluded (like me).

[8] Shuushin 2-Jan-05/12:55 PM Reply

lol, this is the third time I've logged in and the second time I've gotten two of *your* poems to randomly review...

dimples? that's not what came to mind. Either way, a good message.

[8] 7!3 3-Sep-05/5:44 AM Reply

haha nice..