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Sugar Coating (Free verse) by nentwined

Sugar coated candy pill, wrapped with love and good intentions, makes you soft and sick and simple -- slap your head and twist your dimples.

Christof 20-Aug-02/7:03 AM
I like the kick in the face at the end - a real wake-up to the emotionally deluded (like me).




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