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Sugar Coating (Free verse) by nentwined

Sugar coated candy pill, wrapped with love and good intentions, makes you soft and sick and simple -- slap your head and twist your dimples.

Shuushin 2-Jan-05/12:55 PM
lol, this is the third time I've logged in and the second time I've gotten two of *your* poems to randomly review...

dimples? that's not what came to mind. Either way, a good message.




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