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To walk in a dream in a dream (Free verse) by mozac
To walk in a dream in a dream And the beginning of something new I am, I was but perhaps I did not see A strange reality How nothing belongs to anyone And only my Heart is my own I search the world through molded eyes With desires that aren?t my own Maybe become a water drop ? flow with a stream Know this is a path, feel there is an end I close all light and I cannot see Perhaps I don?t know how to look Perhaps I don?t remember what to see But then this is not real Since I am only my memory - or someone else's And that only for a few moments Or some deep recollection In a feeling of continuation As a circle In a point I am, I was and then no more If only I could remember what I already know My reality Such a beautiful reality My existence And happiness Those things without compensation Easily achieved immortality In a flash of desire The blindfold can break I can relearn to listen Through wounded eyes

Up the ladder: Judge Me Not
Down the ladder: Circle

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.35
Weighted score: 5.3334007
Overall Rank: 3481
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST
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[4]... anonymous @ | 21-Jul-01/3:08 AM | Reply
unfocused
[n/a] ifni @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
This dances.
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