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To walk in a dream in a dream (Free verse) by mozac
To walk in a dream in a dream
And the beginning of something new
I am, I
was but perhaps I did not see
A strange reality
How nothing belongs to
anyone
And only my Heart is my own
I search the world through molded
eyes
With desires that aren?t my own
Maybe become a water drop ? flow
with a stream
Know this is a path, feel there is an end
I close all
light and I cannot see
Perhaps I don?t know how to look
Perhaps I don?t
remember what to see
But then this is not real
Since I am only my
memory
- or someone else's
And that only for a few moments
Or some deep
recollection
In a feeling of continuation
As a circle
In a point
I am, I
was and then no more
If only I could remember what I already know
My
reality
Such a beautiful reality
My existence
And happiness
Those things
without compensation
Easily achieved immortality
In a flash of desire
The blindfold can break
I can relearn to listen
Through wounded eyes
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST
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