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For fun (Free verse) by Cha no Onna One boyfriend for sale!
One boyfriend for sale!
One smiling and biting young
Boyfriend for sale!
I admit that he's mine
But I can't pay the fine!
One Boyfriend for sale!
(With apologies to Shel Silverstein)
Up the ladder:
Wedding Day...
Down the ladder:
Waiting to understand
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Posted: April 17, 2002 7:57 AM PDT; Last modified: April 17, 2002 7:57 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8412375 Overall Rank: 10620 Comments:
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17-Apr-02/7:18 PM
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*snicker* two-fiddy, two-fiddy.
very cute. I don't know the silverstein you're referring to, so I don't know how much apology is necessary. :)
The first is from Where the Sidewalk Ends and is called "For Sale," and the second, I don't know where it's from, but it goes
Oh what shall I do Oh what shall I do This library book is 42 years overdue I admit that it's mine But I can't pay the fine! Oh what shall I do!
i don't know who shel silverstein is, but keep learning from him.
This is downright cute! Got a chuckle out of me.
I'd want to sell anyone who's defining characteristics were "Smiling and biting" too.
P.S.- Shel 4 Life 201 view(s)
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