| Re: My Kites On Grandmother's Four-poster Bed by anitawit |
9-Nov-02/2:36 PM |
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pretty scenes and memories
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| Re: The Bomb by anitawit |
9-Nov-02/2:36 PM |
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| Re: Plastic People by cosmiccantinaguy |
9-Nov-02/2:42 PM |
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this is the angriest poem i've ever read. got a solution, or just a problem?
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| Re: My Woman, My Lover, My Friend by -=SeTTle=- |
11-Nov-02/6:23 AM |
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| Re: I Respect Your Feelings As A Woman And A Human by -=SeTTle=- |
11-Nov-02/6:24 AM |
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this bit is just not working for you settle. sorry. no poontang for you.
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| Re: Picnic Of Love by -=SeTTle=- |
11-Nov-02/6:26 AM |
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my god, man! get your meds adjusted for the sake of all that is sacred and profane!
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| Re: gerbil by betty swallox |
11-Nov-02/6:27 AM |
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funny. (but wrong rhyme scheme to be a limerick.)
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| Re: Reasons by little_angel_maria |
11-Nov-02/7:14 AM |
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| Re: An ode to my sugar daddy, but in haiku by horus8 |
11-Nov-02/5:52 PM |
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again, you fuck me here in public. should i be blushing? have a nine.
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| Re: There is no end by INTRANSIT |
11-Nov-02/5:55 PM |
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hmmm, my bruises were never as pretty as pink (bless you for not knowing that???!) nor have i ever seen grey jis...as for the bad seed, yes, amen to that. but who what when where why...or at least how? i like to watch....even it if it's only on the ranker. you'll not get a vote from me until i get some salient details, sirrah!
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| Re: A Green Moons Haze by pink_punk_kisses87 |
11-Nov-02/5:57 PM |
almost there....
but jigsaw aren't jagged (shattered, whatever) even though they are confusing and in a thousand pieces. dammit man! (woman)! you are a tease. shape this up. the bit about the haze seeping closer to your heart is eerily brilliant, damn you. i demand a rewrite.
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| Re: Handy Smurf by Bachus |
11-Nov-02/5:58 PM |
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how'd he get that name anyway....hmmm
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| Re: echoes by brazen |
11-Nov-02/6:00 PM |
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i think you force the rhyme at the expence of the experience in this one brazen. sorry for that.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/6:44 AM |
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this is yellow and it's catchy, like fever of the same name. have a 7 for your efforts.
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| Re: epicentre by richa |
12-Nov-02/11:34 AM |
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| Re: Returning by INTRANSIT |
12-Nov-02/12:00 PM |
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| Re: There is no end by INTRANSIT |
12-Nov-02/12:01 PM |
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yes, yes. true, but does not cut me to the quick, as the other does.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/12:22 PM |
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| Re: Tainted by darby pyn |
12-Nov-02/1:30 PM |
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damn. fine. work. leaves me wanting more
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| Re: me by spazzman15 |
12-Nov-02/1:42 PM |
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i'd rather be a hammer than a nail, and the play's the thing to catch a king....
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