regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-02/2:08 PM
I'm initially lost between the starting spider and the whale, but, it gets better...to good. It is consummate in the end.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-02/2:08 PM
I'm initially lost between the starting spider and the whale, but, it gets better...to good. It is consummate in the end.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-02/2:54 PM
I like the way it flows to the last line. Good job of futuristic thought. "To Exist!"
Re: The Sea by venusdemilo	22-Jul-02/2:56 PM
Existentalism in its simplicity. Taoism struggles within this!
Re: The Eyestroke by seebergerb	22-Jul-02/2:58 PM
2nd stanza says it all for humanity! It reminds me of another poem. See my letter to time.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-02/3:04 PM
Reads like an orgiastic trip through time. Good word flow.
Re: Suffocating by mytenderrage	22-Jul-02/3:10 PM
There is help available. Vallium, Darvocet, any narcotic will suffice. Take two, breathe deeply, and call me in the morning. The doctor is "In".
Re: Craving by mytenderrage	22-Jul-02/3:14 PM
We all crave love, or the chance to bake muffins. Anyone who needs to see a shrink, needs to have their head examined! I like it.
Re: Stranger by mytenderrage	22-Jul-02/3:17 PM
Let us go for a walk, past the cemetary of time. You'll awaken.
Re: Wondering Eyes by Holden	22-Jul-02/3:24 PM
Whether to "Wander" or "Wonder", Will Angels set you free? Coexistence herein, is truly the key.
Re: Small and Simple by venusdemilo	22-Jul-02/3:28 PM
The breakup of a Relationship; A study of Sociologic pathology. (Sociology 101) We all "stumbles" through this.
Re: The Mirror Man by Mister Cakes	22-Jul-02/4:47 PM
A paradox, or utter paranoia? Stop looking there!
Re: Existence; Part 1 by ARTIE	22-Jul-02/4:49 PM
Speak!
Re: The Poison by TheTiredTyrant	22-Jul-02/5:07 PM
Oh straightened back, on slab of stone, so tense, no slack, you're not alone!
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jul-02/9:50 PM
The last line leaves me .....Looking for Jesu at Club "Med". Bum"Med", that is! The rest of it reads conceitedly well.
Re: Eclipse 99 by hlatkins	24-Jul-02/9:53 PM
I could see where I was going, until I decided instead...to go to bed. But, I like it.
Re: summer by itchiwitch	24-Jul-02/9:56 PM
Good Haiku! Great imagery. Geeeeez! Can someone just submit a reasonable criticism once in a while in this venue? "10"
Re: Santa Ana, California by bondjedi	24-Jul-02/9:58 PM
Good Haiku! Great imagery! "10" Geeeez! Can one ever receive valid critique in this venue?
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jul-02/10:56 AM
Oh yeah, REAL meaningful comment! About as meaningful as my realtionship with an inflatable doll; I had to give her up - she was just too needy!
Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	10-Oct-03/7:34 PM
One has only to read [most of] the string of comments above to realize that DA's third verse is the genius that confused, then offended and then inspired all of you to quickly "pull your open blouses closed" thereby revealing your own prudish personal brawl, the subliminal "clothing" that protects the spew of your ment. DA mocked - and won. That ot to be wth a tn.