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20 most recent comments by ARTIE (61-80)

regarding some deleted poem... 15-Jul-02/12:08 PM
I like all the thought here. It is simple and identifiable.
Re: Black Hole Soul by Red_is_life 15-Jul-02/12:17 PM
Morbidly entertaining. Good vision.
Re: Your Smile by ARTIE 15-Jul-02/1:40 PM
Hey Dark Angel, answer me this: Do you see a glass as half empty or half full?
I'm curious.
Re: Your Smile by ARTIE 15-Jul-02/2:10 PM
Sorry, but the real answer is: You, need a smaller glass!
Re: Your Smile by ARTIE 15-Jul-02/4:23 PM
Oh, Dark Angel, what have you done?
You couldn't see the need for a smaller glass? You can dish it, but you cannot take it. In my irreverant dyslexia, "Oh my Dog! What have I done?" Ask horus8 for a Zanex, it'll all be well.
Re: The End! by ARTIE 15-Jul-02/4:36 PM
Oh...Dark Angel, you amaze me. I really thought you had moved beyond fisting, it's so passe anymore. Oh my DOG! What have I done?
Re: THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8 15-Jul-02/4:59 PM
Geeeeeez! What are you in for?
Re: The End! by ARTIE 15-Jul-02/5:07 PM
Oh my Dog! There is cleverness in your tone! Very well....
Re: Clit by unknown 17-Jul-02/5:51 PM
Oh, Dark Angel, if your "maximum grid in Paintshop Pro" is blocking your view, how can you even comment on the last line? Go for it Razorgrin, dive in and seek.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Jul-02/6:11 PM
Wow! Nothing like an efficient, conscientious, life support system!
Re: Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17-Jul-02/6:21 PM
Hmmmmm! This smells of....not the F.B.I., but of why?
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Jul-02/6:29 PM
...unless you've walked in those shoes, it could be your personal hell. Tread lightly!
Re: Death and the Non-Scanning Poem by tooniron 18-Jul-02/7:21 AM
I like it, but, after the first three lines I was struggling with the flow. The only good cat, is a dead cat!
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Jul-02/7:44 AM
It starts out hip-hop, then turns into the antithesis of it's own title. The systhesis of it all, though, is in the last two lines, "Next thursday......." I like it in a mixed up sort of way.
Re: Why we're here by ARTIE 18-Jul-02/9:46 AM
Ah..., but for the chance, a muffin to bake, I realize now, my haiku mistake!
Can I borrow a spatula?
Re: HERE TO THERE by ARTIE 22-Jul-02/2:02 PM
That "mushroom trip", as psylycybic(?) as it was, may as well have been 12 years of marriage...as the story was told. Love is often unfortunate!


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