regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Jul-02/12:08 PM |
I like all the thought here. It is simple and identifiable.
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Re: Black Hole Soul by Red_is_life |
15-Jul-02/12:17 PM |
Morbidly entertaining. Good vision.
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Re: Your Smile by ARTIE |
15-Jul-02/1:40 PM |
Hey Dark Angel, answer me this: Do you see a glass as half empty or half full?
I'm curious.
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Re: Your Smile by ARTIE |
15-Jul-02/2:10 PM |
Sorry, but the real answer is: You, need a smaller glass!
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Re: Your Smile by ARTIE |
15-Jul-02/4:23 PM |
Oh, Dark Angel, what have you done?
You couldn't see the need for a smaller glass? You can dish it, but you cannot take it. In my irreverant dyslexia, "Oh my Dog! What have I done?" Ask horus8 for a Zanex, it'll all be well.
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Re: The End! by ARTIE |
15-Jul-02/4:36 PM |
Oh...Dark Angel, you amaze me. I really thought you had moved beyond fisting, it's so passe anymore. Oh my DOG! What have I done?
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Re: THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8 |
15-Jul-02/4:59 PM |
Geeeeeez! What are you in for?
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Re: The End! by ARTIE |
15-Jul-02/5:07 PM |
Oh my Dog! There is cleverness in your tone! Very well....
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Re: Clit by unknown |
17-Jul-02/5:51 PM |
Oh, Dark Angel, if your "maximum grid in Paintshop Pro" is blocking your view, how can you even comment on the last line? Go for it Razorgrin, dive in and seek.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Jul-02/6:11 PM |
Wow! Nothing like an efficient, conscientious, life support system!
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Re: Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
17-Jul-02/6:21 PM |
Hmmmmm! This smells of....not the F.B.I., but of why?
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regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Jul-02/6:29 PM |
...unless you've walked in those shoes, it could be your personal hell. Tread lightly!
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Re: Death and the Non-Scanning Poem by tooniron |
18-Jul-02/7:21 AM |
I like it, but, after the first three lines I was struggling with the flow. The only good cat, is a dead cat!
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regarding some deleted poem... |
18-Jul-02/7:44 AM |
It starts out hip-hop, then turns into the antithesis of it's own title. The systhesis of it all, though, is in the last two lines, "Next thursday......." I like it in a mixed up sort of way.
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Re: Why we're here by ARTIE |
18-Jul-02/9:46 AM |
Ah..., but for the chance, a muffin to bake, I realize now, my haiku mistake!
Can I borrow a spatula?
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Re: HERE TO THERE by ARTIE |
22-Jul-02/2:02 PM |
That "mushroom trip", as psylycybic(?) as it was, may as well have been 12 years of marriage...as the story was told. Love is often unfortunate!
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