on first kiss by lost in america
12 Mar 2003, 7:49 AM
spare and sweet
on some deleted poem
10 Mar 2003, 4:59 PM
absurd. an "8" worth of absurdity.
on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus
12 Mar 2003, 1:39 PM
I liked this poem a lot but I sheepishly confess I'm still trying to puzzle out the meaning of the last stanza. Can I get a hint?
on some deleted poem
11 Mar 2003, 1:14 PM
what does it mean if you like both sides?
on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america
13 Mar 2003, 5:59 AM
it's a great poem but I still have to limerick you:
I think "lost in america"'s lost
and would be wheree'r he was tossed
he skipped Bangledesh
and some chick's willing flesh
because of the cultural cost.
I think "lost in america"'s lost
and would be wheree'r he was tossed
he skipped Bangledesh
and some chick's willing flesh
because of the cultural cost.
hmmm, what will you be thinking, while you're squirming around inside the scapegoat christ, about the 95% of humans who ever lived that your god is torturing for no other reason than that they didn't dedicate their lives to satisfying his narcissism? Numbers 31, that's who you serve.
on esopus creek by unknown
12 Mar 2003, 1:16 PM
This poem fucking rocks. Oh wow. I grew up with such country in my backyard 'n' much time alone in it. nosTALgia, it's such a great drug.
Although I suppose DA has a point. I'd say lurking instead of wriggling, but only because I'm a melodramatic fool. "still trying to reach up" could just be "still reaching" ??? I dunno. But I really like this poem, even if those really are flaws.
Although I suppose DA has a point. I'd say lurking instead of wriggling, but only because I'm a melodramatic fool. "still trying to reach up" could just be "still reaching" ??? I dunno. But I really like this poem, even if those really are flaws.
on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus
12 Mar 2003, 3:47 PM
was bare bare instead of bear on purpose, or a typo? I hope on purpose, it made me laugh.
on just as we were by daniella
12 Mar 2003, 11:34 AM
mmm, yummy. This is one of the few poems I've ever read which made me wish there was a version on video.
on some deleted poem
12 Mar 2003, 11:50 AM
god'swife's words are lovely and dark
and I just know it would be such a lark
with a switch and some twine
and one really good line
to meet her alone in a park
and I just know it would be such a lark
with a switch and some twine
and one really good line
to meet her alone in a park
on dreams by babygurl420
10 Mar 2003, 5:49 PM
methamphetamines burn holes in your brain.
I've heard.
I've heard.
on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik
10 Mar 2003, 5:43 PM
damn, a lurv pome that I like. Time for bed. 8
on some deleted poem
10 Mar 2003, 5:04 PM
mmm, delicious! Like soft Belgian white chocolate dribbled over a hard slab of Schwarze Herren Schokolade.
on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america
11 Mar 2003, 12:02 PM
I like this poem a whack.
and pooh-poohing lowercase is old, it is meta-stuffiness. Capitals get in the way sometimes, it's as simple as that. Words are meant to be twisted and poked and well-used and fucked with. Kind of like^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^Hwoah, CAREFUL
and pooh-poohing lowercase is old, it is meta-stuffiness. Capitals get in the way sometimes, it's as simple as that. Words are meant to be twisted and poked and well-used and fucked with. Kind of like^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^Hwoah, CAREFUL
on yellow verse by daniella
12 Mar 2003, 11:43 AM
nifty! (add "madly" to line 2 'n' it'd scan better)
on some deleted poem
12 Mar 2003, 4:51 PM
jesus christ.
10.
10.