| Re: a comment on if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems |
10-Mar-03/6:41 PM |
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I thank you very much for your some what interesting(hopefully) compliment..I usually take to mind in what others say like for instence razorgrin(or something like that) says that in many many words that i am a pieace of shit and that no one cares about me not even my spleen(i got her/him back) and several others who shall remain nameless but after reading your comment that made me think that some people out there(not many) but some of them do care about my work and they appreciate the INNOCENCE of a child and the least the could do as you menchioned(cant spell) in your comment that i am quote on quote 'very BRAVE for entering a forum of expirenced writers'..i only entered this forum becase i wanted some advice and comments from the wise and proven..not someone my age...because someone my age who reads me poems wil say that they are the greatest thing in the world...and thats ok to hear but i would much rather have someone point out my mistakes instead of praising them and not even knowing it...I need alot of help in spelling(hehhe) and maybe some inspirations but after reading your comment that has changed my view of the poetry world...I thank you for taking your time to read it and others and i hope that you enjoy them as much as i do writing them....Thank you
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| Re: Dreaming What Seems To Be by Tormentedsoul718 |
1-Mar-03/12:19 PM |
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wow i cant imagine why anyone would give it an 8? they must of read it wrong...stupid blind idiots they are missing the point of this poem its so...full of ryming and thoughts and everything..YET ANOTHER 10
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| Re: Birthday Love by Tormentedsoul718 |
1-Mar-03/12:16 PM |
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AHHH yet another 10 i wish i could write as half as good as you do..your poems are so expressive and meaningful..10 all the way
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| Re: Love Turn by Tormentedsoul718 |
1-Mar-03/12:15 PM |
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wow....one word wow..have you gotten any of these published? I really like them..Keep on writing..your poems compared to mine will definetly blow mine away i am only 12 and i love to write your poems inspire me to keep on writing no mater what people say..they belittle me and my work but after i have read thses nothing can put me down anymore another 10
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| Re: Someone by Tormentedsoul718 |
1-Mar-03/12:11 PM |
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wow this is so good not much of a variety though on ryming..it can be tough but cares and tears went perfect together so dramatic and it almost painted a scene in my mind about the part when it said sitting all alone on a quiet night and then waiting for someone to make it bright...sheer brillance to me..I give it a 10 because it explains how you feel and what you want and what you look for in a a girl..i really liked it and please keep amazing me with your work! this definetly deserves a 10 if i could vote anything higher it would definetly be alot higher
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| Re: a comment on No One by sk8boardandpoems |
27-Feb-03/1:44 PM |
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Ummmmm no i will view u as one of my higher superiors but not as a goddess
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| Re: a comment on No One by sk8boardandpoems |
26-Feb-03/4:17 PM |
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Yes i am aware that she is better than me but that does not intimidate me(if it was meant to) i am once again just starting out! i'll take your comments into concideration and work on it
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| Re: a comment on sick and demented by sk8boardandpoems |
26-Feb-03/4:14 PM |
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Thanx i agree since i am a beginner i don not know that much but with some advice and pointers from you people i can fix my mistakes and work on it! Thanx
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| Re: Earthly Delights? by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:54 PM |
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I am finally finsihed after what i thought my last minutes on this earth i finally DID NOT read any of you poems or haikus thank the lord that i didn't it was easy judging by your titles they all sucked
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| Re: Tennesee Waterfall by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:53 PM |
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| Re: Sleepy Geek by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:53 PM |
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| Re: Luna Moth by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:53 PM |
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| Re: R'lyeh by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:52 PM |
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| Re: A Passing Love by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:52 PM |
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quote on quote: no one cares about yuo not even your spleen
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| Re: "to do" list:accomplished by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:51 PM |
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im having such a good time putting down zeros for everything you have
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| Re: Innsmouth by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:51 PM |
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oh but yes people docare about my spleen my good man zero zero zero
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| Re: Return to Kadath by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:50 PM |
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| Re: On a chill morning by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:50 PM |
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| Re: Perversions by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:50 PM |
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| Re: Lucky's Day by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:49 PM |
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zero zero homeless is what you would be but no....poetry saved you by the hair of your chinny chin chin!
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