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Someone

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Sep 2002 · 2 comments

Sitting alone again on a quiet night Waiting for someone to make it feel bright Thinking of the one i've yet to find Someone to help me find my mind I'm confused on who to talk to Someone that can make a feeling feel so new Thoughts of love that make me forget the past Someone to make the feeling last Someone that makes me feel like myself Someone that can take my heart from its self Someone to hold when staring out into the sky Anyone that answers the question why I just want someone to kiss Someone that takes me away from this This lifeless feeling that is upon me Fighting my way through this debris Someone that loves the way i am Someone that knows i'll be there for them Just a girl that is there and cares Someone to wipe away all these tears Just someone special to hold on to Someone that helps me get through Anyone will do for someone But no one will take me away from this one I just need to hold need to love If you read this your the one i write of Someone is waiting but has to find me The love is there but it has yet to be I'm lost looking for someone I'm here just waiting for anyone

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[n/a] vulcan 4-Sep-02/1:36 AM Reply

"There's no frigate like a book!".It was rather confused.your use of Words are limited.Your feelings highly poetic yet to get something off your chest,they're good enough.So!6

[10] sk8boardandpoems 1-Mar-03/12:11 PM Reply

wow this is so good not much of a variety though on ryming..it can be tough but cares and tears went perfect together so dramatic and it almost painted a scene in my mind about the part when it said sitting all alone on a quiet night and then waiting for someone to make it bright...sheer brillance to me..I give it a 10 because it explains how you feel and what you want and what you look for in a a girl..i really liked it and please keep amazing me with your work! this definetly deserves a 10 if i could vote anything higher it would definetly be alot higher