poemranker ::Ghosts I by timfowler

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Free verse № 12837

Ghosts I

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Sep 2002 · 2 comments

In the spotlight of a crisis uncertain of the scars of a score of collisions in a score of bars. Truth, it seems, is betrayed by dreams. Betrayed by dreams: Sad Columbine to play the Queen, in Harlequin's Charade. As rain on glass, in crystal drops experience condenses in a moment's loss. Wraithed in sorrows, long forgotten I see a face out of childhood: a face out of time; a face out of answers; a face with my eyes. The face of an angel, turning to dust. I lie on the sand as the tide of convention sweeps me away into his arms.

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[7] Christof 3-Sep-02/3:15 AM Reply
Again I like this, but I sometimes think that you're too obscure - I don't see what 'he tide of convention' has to do with what's gone before. I think this has a personal meaning for you that doesn't transmit to the reader.
[7] little_big_nose 5-Jan-04/6:31 PM Reply
you can inturpet this poem in so amny many ways it's great