sk8boardandpoems1 Mar 2003

wow this is so good not much of a variety though on ryming..it can be tough but cares and tears went perfect together so dramatic and it almost painted a scene in my mind about the part when it said sitting all alone on a quiet night and then waiting for someone to make it bright...sheer brillance to me..I give it a 10 because it explains how you feel and what you want and what you look for in a a girl..i really liked it and please keep amazing me with your work! this definetly deserves a 10 if i could vote anything higher it would definetly be alot higher