Re: Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:47 PM
ZERO ZERO ALL of it
Re: haunter of the dark by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:47 PM
ahhh not another one i hate having to oput zeros..o wait is this razorgrin's work never mind i enojoy it!
Re: Deep Inner Pain by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:48 PM
We all ave our week points in life i cant spell and razorgrin obviously cant write either!
Re: Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:48 PM
boo boo is what all your work is
Re: Lucky's Day by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:49 PM
zero zero homeless is what you would be but no....poetry saved you by the hair of your chinny chin chin!
Re: Perversions by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:50 PM
zero zero
Re: On a chill morning by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:50 PM
too bad yet another zero
Re: Return to Kadath by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:50 PM
aww another zero
Re: Innsmouth by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:51 PM
oh but yes people docare about my spleen my good man zero zero zero
Re: "to do" list:accomplished by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:51 PM
im having such a good time putting down zeros for everything you have
Re: A Passing Love by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:52 PM
quote on quote: no one cares about yuo not even your spleen
Re: R'lyeh by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:52 PM
4 more to go
Re: Luna Moth by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:53 PM
3 more to go
Re: Sleepy Geek by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:53 PM
2 more to go
Re: Tennesee Waterfall by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:53 PM
1 more to go
Re: Earthly Delights? by razorgrin	25-Feb-03/3:54 PM
I am finally finsihed after what i thought my last minutes on this earth i finally DID NOT read any of you poems or haikus thank the lord that i didn't it was easy judging by your titles they all sucked
Re: Someone by Tormentedsoul718	1-Mar-03/12:11 PM
wow this is so good not much of a variety though on ryming..it can be tough but cares and tears went perfect together so dramatic and it almost painted a scene in my mind about the part when it said sitting all alone on a quiet night and then waiting for someone to make it bright...sheer brillance to me..I give it a 10 because it explains how you feel and what you want and what you look for in a a girl..i really liked it and please keep amazing me with your work! this definetly deserves a 10 if i could vote anything higher it would definetly be alot higher
Re: Love Turn by Tormentedsoul718	1-Mar-03/12:15 PM
wow....one word wow..have you gotten any of these published? I really like them..Keep on writing..your poems compared to mine will definetly blow mine away i am only 12 and i love to write your poems inspire me to keep on writing no mater what people say..they belittle me and my work but after i have read thses nothing can put me down anymore another 10
Re: Birthday Love by Tormentedsoul718	1-Mar-03/12:16 PM
AHHH yet another 10 i wish i could write as half as good as you do..your poems are so expressive and meaningful..10 all the way
Re: Dreaming What Seems To Be by Tormentedsoul718	1-Mar-03/12:19 PM
wow i cant imagine why anyone would give it an 8? they must of read it wrong...stupid blind idiots they are missing the point of this poem its so...full of ryming and thoughts and everything..YET ANOTHER 10