Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
25-Feb-03/12:39 PM |
DAMN GOOD man i think ur poem s excellent i am the one u wrote about and said dont kill yourself and u thought i was a hormonal young boy and i am not a boy and i am a girl i am 12 years of age and i would just like to point that out my poems are not even as half as good as yourss are because i have only been writein for like 4 years off and on and as i can imagine u have alot more years on me with both age and writing poems and just everythig about it i would appreciate it if u could maybe coach me into how making peoiple visualize my poems..u are probably thinking why would i want to help her...well because this could maybe be my career i love writing and i would like some herlp from a professional..thank you
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Re: Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:35 PM |
I hate it and i think its pure crap
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Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:36 PM |
i hate it and its crap all of it i wouldn't be surprised if he copied it from his friend that he killed out of jealousy
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Re: Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:38 PM |
crap i am getting im back for leaving such nice remarks on mine so therefor i lower myself to your standards and play at your little game
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Re: Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:39 PM |
kink in space eh? i wish that you would be in space with out no air so that you may be left to die with out rendering the thought of living
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Re: Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:39 PM |
u think mine are bad that is no reason to comment that way you did
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Re: Watching Fraser Shop On Ebay by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:40 PM |
ha ha ha ha i mock you and your silly little haikus
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Re: Watching Fraser Shop On Ebay by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:40 PM |
maybe you should buy a soul and a mind on ebay
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Re: Chuds in the mall by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:41 PM |
chuds in the mail? maybe you should send away for a brain and a soul because you obviously wont find one on ebay worth your reach
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Re: Walls by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:42 PM |
If only i had the time to rate all of your poems and haikus and whatever it is u write and give them all zeros u need help!
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Re: perversions 2: the revenge by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:45 PM |
perversion? does that have something to do with what happened to you as a little child? maybe....because all of your work sucks im not saying mine is the greatest in the world but come on im just in the 7th grade and anyway i dont think that people can really be judged on theor art or talent anyway i just joined poemrankers because i thought it woud be a nice expirence but as you can see my expirence has been anything but nice thanx to you razorgrin and quite franquely i dont care if i cant spell because neither can you!0
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Re: new year's eve by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/3:46 PM |
HOW CAN SOMEONE GIVE THIS BULL**** A 10? THEY MUST EITHER BE VERY BLIND OR VERY VERY NICE TO GIVE A PIEACE OF SHIT LIKE THIS A 10!
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